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- Precious Gold Drops -

Light falls down from the summer's sheer clouds For the future no gates remain locked, spread your wings A bird in the sky your soul flies free intoxicating spirits Upon loves beautiful ray of light drunken wavers Not dwelling on the past and using energy on what went wrong Happy people get feelings out done and dusted Awakening flames dancing butterflies flutter Warm inner wings a heart takes glorious flight Brilliance of a rainbow seducing thoughts softly whisper Life's worth it's weight in gold, why hesitate ? Inside the mirrors always aglow Beauty's in the eyes forever one bows and beholds Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 01.03.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/22/2015 4:12:00 AM
Dear Anne Lise, This is an inspiring poem, flying high! Julia, xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/22/2015 7:41:00 AM
- Thanks Julia, for the lovely visit and comments :) - smile & hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/9/2015 7:44:00 AM
Spread hope and light and the power of joy! Wonderful message! Reminds me of Nina Simones song: Feeling good :) Check it out, if you like! Thank you for making me smile.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2015 7:48:00 AM
- Thanks Lotte, for the lovely visit and comments :) - smile & hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/16/2015 8:41:00 PM
This write makes you want to spread your wings.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2015 4:31:00 AM
- A pleasure to share with you, David - thank you for your words and pleasant visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/8/2015 1:40:00 PM
thank you everyone for the beautiful heartwarming comments smiling deeply touching most of all thank you anne lise your pen golden in this dear pal wishing you a blessed sunday
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2015 1:52:00 PM
- Golden drops from two pens ..... blessed Sunday to you too, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/8/2015 12:51:00 PM
Another lovely colab....:-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2015 1:06:00 PM
- Thanks Donna, for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2015 6:52:00 AM
Stunning imagery. As always beauty is born when your talents are put together.
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:45:00 AM
- Thanks dear Monterey, for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2015 2:25:00 AM
It is thought provoking! Very good.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2015 7:45:00 AM
- Thanks Marilyn, for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2015 1:57:00 AM
I love these beautiful optimistic lines...congrats to both of you on TPOD!! Sorry I'm late...hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2015 7:46:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations and lovely visit Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 10:22:00 PM
Lovely imagery, beautiful theme, awesome presentation...stunning pen...Liam Mcdaid..looking for to more poems..all the very best and congrats. A 7 for u :-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2015 7:43:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations, a 7 and lovely visit Maaya :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 7:24:00 PM
That was so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations on being chosen POTD Anne Lise and Liam - what a great collaborative masterpiece of two great pens being seamlessly merged into one single pen with grace :).
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2015 7:42:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations and lovely visit, Suraj :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 2:01:00 PM
Just beautiful may your pen always have a golden flow. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 2:13:00 PM
- Thanks dear Phyllis, for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 12:13:00 PM
You have really hit the spot with the last line of this poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 12:34:00 PM
- Matthew, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 10:01:00 AM
congrats Anne... your golden words are inspiration here within... I'm so proud of you!!! :))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 12:33:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations,Aiyah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 9:20:00 AM
May your pens always flow with golden words - many congrats Anne Lise and Liam yet another glorious collaboration. congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 12:32:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 8:57:00 AM
Hey Anne Lise, BIG congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! A truly beautiful and imagery filled work of art. Two minds joined as one in the collaboration of this most soothing piece. Be Blessed, Neva
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 12:32:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Neva :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 7:24:00 AM
My dear friend Anne Lise and Liam, congrats! i echo my previous comments.. :)!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 12:31:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 6:01:00 AM
Firstly congrats for the poem of the day and secondly sending my sweet smile for this awesome collaboration. 7+ i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 6:10:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations and a 7 , my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 5:49:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations on poem of the day. Hugs Janet
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 6:09:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations, dear Janet - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2015 5:43:00 AM
Back with congrats for two people whom I love. Hugs! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 6:08:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2015 3:10:00 PM
'Inside the mirrors always aglow Beauty's in the eyes forever one bows and beholds' So very spiritual and beautiful. Thanks for sharing Anne Lise Andresen
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 5:33:00 AM
- Fatima, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2015 12:18:00 PM
Great work with the magic touch of two free soaring poetic hearts. Emile. #7
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 5:32:00 AM
- Emile, thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2015 12:17:00 PM
Ahh!! Another awesome collaboration..Way to go!!Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/6/2015 6:10:00 AM
Okay..SK
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2015 2:42:00 AM
- Sara, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2015 9:01:00 AM
Anne Lise, this is a beautiful collaboration between you and Liam ;) hope your week has been a good one xoxo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2015 11:06:00 AM
- Wilma, thank you for the "gold" words and lovely visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2015 2:16:00 PM
as always, an inimitable work for the both of you, anne.. I hope you are doing fine and your dad is coping.. happy day and huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2015 3:18:00 AM
- Dear Nette, thank you for the "gold" words and lovely visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2015 12:55:00 PM
Another beautiful piece...my soul is soaring along with you two.....Tim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2015 3:17:00 AM
- Thank you, Tim - I'm glad you enjoy our poem :- Precious Gold Drops - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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