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- Heavenly Hugs -

Unique is the discipline of love Understanding God's law Faith holds supreme commander Sometimes we have to fight our way through a concrete jungle stone cold dreams nightmare evaluates Rocking the cradle unworthy desires no peace or rest for the wicked deeds in order to find the answers to hopes prayer Truth pointing us directions within our code of moral conduct which supports us in our voyage In the walk of life chaos grips hearts consumed with hate Without faith our souls identity will become dust Needing hugs from heaven to survive A Collaborated Poem 19.11.2015 Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid (tercets unrymed)

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Date: 1/20/2016 1:24:00 AM
This so great Anne! :) -Jonna
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2016 3:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Jonna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2015 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Anne. Indeed, without Heavenly Hug, we are hopelessly lost. Good work. Blessings. MC!.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2015 2:41:00 PM
- A pleasure to share with you, Curtis - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/4/2015 1:33:00 PM
This is a lovely collaboration Anne Lise! Absolutely love it ;) have a good weekend! Hugs W
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/4/2015 1:57:00 PM
- Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - I wish you a peaceful and great weekend, Wilma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/29/2015 7:02:00 AM
Faith is the answer Anne... you are right. A poem full of content that we would all do well to ponder. Well done! Keith
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/29/2015 7:20:00 AM
- "Sometimes we have to fight our way through a concrete jungle", Keith - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2015 7:20:00 PM
Nice piece of writing Anne, might have to read more of yours :) Aroha, Quincy Mac
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2015 5:55:00 AM
- You are welcome :) - Thank you for this lovely comments Quincy Mac - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2015 1:11:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Another great collaboration again from you and Liam. The last verse, "Needing hugs from heaven to survive," is a marvelous end point for this write -- and says it all!! "TR + FAV"!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2015 1:28:00 PM
- I knew you'd like this, dear Gary - Yes, we need "hugs" from heaven in 2015 - Thank you for beautiful words - especially glad that it was given room in your "golden fav. book" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2015 1:33:00 AM
You two are unstoppable! Great write Liam McDaid & Anne Lise Andresen Another awesome collaboration about the ultimate HUG which we all could use every day!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2015 7:20:00 AM
- Red, many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2015 3:54:00 PM
you work very well together
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2015 7:19:00 AM
- Thanks, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2015 2:54:00 PM
Heavenly collaboration, heavenly poetic results! A seven to each, Anne-Lise and Liam!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2015 3:06:00 PM
- Many thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2015 10:27:00 AM
have a heavenly saturday, anne..huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2015 3:05:00 PM
- You 2 :)
Date: 11/20/2015 3:43:00 PM
Great collaboration Anne Lise and Liam! Let 'Truth continue to point direction along your voyage.' RP.
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:04:00 PM
- R.P., many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2015 10:26:00 AM
A heart touching poem with beautiful message. Nice collaboration so for beautiful pen 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 12:11:00 PM
- Bl, many thanks for nice visit a 7 and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2015 10:12:00 AM
A touching and eloquent description of the human experience. Great work! Emile.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 12:11:00 PM
- Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Emile :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2015 9:35:00 AM
mankind has so many flaws....and unless we put sin on pause....doing our best to Obey His Laws....which is, of course, the Ultimate Cause....;)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 12:10:00 PM
- Eric, many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2015 8:58:00 AM
the two of you can really make images combust, anne... this is enticing.. huggs this happy day!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 12:10:00 PM
- Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Nette :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2015 3:52:00 AM
So true Anne Lise so true.. such a lovely poem u hv come up with dear!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 5:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Dr. Upma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2015 6:58:00 PM
Faith, love, hope -- now that is a group hug!! A powerful message . . . may we always find this hug in our deepest darkest nights.
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Date: 11/20/2015 5:44:00 AM
- Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2015 5:56:00 PM
Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam!A very beautiful, heavenly,captivating sweet love poem you've penned here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Excellent piece!So very beautifully written.I enjoy it.Just outstanding!A very heavenly sweet most beautiful love piece to be held very close to my heart.I love it!Just awesome!Wonderful imagery!Just great! Fantastic collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 5:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for nice visit a 7 and great comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2015 5:33:00 PM
truly golden you pen sang a very beautiful tune anne lise a pleasure writing this with you dear pal wishing you a blessed weekend
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 5:43:00 AM
- Thank you for a beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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