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I heard angels singing about peace Silence in this room only a dim light Is it just a dream of freedom and peace Breaking down the lie build up the truth I'm in doubt .... do I hear angel song Give me an answer, take away my doubt Feeling a little turbulence and bit scared The song is mighty they are singing about peace Silence comes and the dim light is gone There is too much injustice, bombs and war I feel so tired, small and ashamed You are like me and I am like you I hear no angels singing any more Only Blood, Tears and Death * Boston bombing in April 2013 20.04.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 9/11/2013 2:22:00 PM
It is hard to here the angels singing when so much trauma is going on all around us. But, never give up on hope and peace! Great work on this poem, Anne-Lise! Nicely done!...Thank you for the kind comments, as always!
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Date: 9/11/2013 2:33:00 PM
- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Kelly. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2013 1:28:00 AM
so sad,I even have a tear in my eye but that is the reality of how the world is messed.
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Date: 9/9/2013 1:34:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments H.H. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/17/2013 2:31:00 PM
I have a brother-in-law in the army and it just made me think of him immediately. He comes home to tell us of his tales. Thank you for the read and the memory.
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:44:00 PM
- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Maritza. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/6/2013 12:54:00 AM
Anne~ I remember feeling so low when the bombing happened. And there were no words for me, but you did a wonderful job exploring this...a truly wonderful piece!
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:59:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Gina. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/7/2013 4:33:00 AM
hello Anne! i loved this poem, it expresses a fact and i've admired the way you've expressed it! good work :)
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Date: 5/7/2013 6:00:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Vivo. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/5/2013 5:27:00 AM
I love this poem. Just because we cannot hear the angels soft melody over the wretched deafening screech of evil does not mean they are not trying to sing to us.
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:34:00 AM
Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Kim. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2013 2:19:00 PM
Really good. So sad, yet so true. So much going on in this world, we just have to continue through...
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Date: 5/3/2013 2:23:00 PM
- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Caleah- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2013 10:43:00 PM
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Date: 5/1/2013 3:07:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Gigno - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2013 4:23:00 AM
Such sorrow and sadness here. Well done. Betty
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Date: 4/29/2013 4:25:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Betty - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2013 3:28:00 AM
You prompted me to read this now... it gave me goosebumps-- beautiful expression of how it feels when we just don't understand-- the reason. I guess we really don't have all the answers--one day we will.
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Date: 4/29/2013 3:33:00 AM
- I never believe I'm going to understand such horrors Kim. Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/28/2013 4:37:00 AM
Ominous words, Dearest Anne. But in knowing these things we are better equipped to face the reality of this life.... Jake
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Date: 4/28/2013 5:42:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Jake/John, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/27/2013 3:27:00 PM
You described the despair that came with the incident quite well in your chosen words. That was an infamous occurrence.
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Date: 4/28/2013 3:38:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Robert - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2013 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this beautiful and deep gem of yours. Though, so sad...~A.O
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:49:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/24/2013 5:25:00 AM
and kind of scary
Date: 4/24/2013 5:03:00 AM
silence comes, dim light some, awful war an dying, angels sometimes come, long as their hair aint drying, some i aint denying...
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Date: 4/24/2013 5:05:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Don. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/23/2013 7:58:00 PM
Wow, this was deep. This poem just comes to show how big we really are. Your voice is heard by many that feel the same exact way, Anne! I know how it is to feel small and unheard. This is a very intense poem filled with love and emotion. There is so much good in the world too. Hope the bright side comes your way! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/24/2013 2:35:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/23/2013 4:34:00 PM
So sad the world seems in chaos. Nicely written piece Anne Lise. love phyl
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Date: 4/24/2013 2:34:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/23/2013 10:00:00 AM
the world seems to be falling apart...nicely penned Anne....
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:02:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/23/2013 2:04:00 AM
Anne Lise...this is so beautifully written. We want peace, but things seem to go from bad to worse. Religion, ideologies, culture and color can only bring separation if we let it. This poured out from your heart...we all felt it. One step towards peace, my dear! Hugs!
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Date: 4/23/2013 2:06:00 AM
- Nice that you visit and comments my poem. - Thank you Eileen! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 10:26:00 PM
It's awfully sad, but you've described the way it is. You're not as alone as your poem says though. There are many of us who share your thoughts. Jack
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Date: 4/23/2013 1:10:00 AM
Jack, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 2:19:00 PM
I enjoyed this Anne, some very deep and thoughtful metaphors with the use of light and dark, ( Ying / Yang), in your poem.Where there's light there is hope.
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Date: 4/23/2013 1:10:00 AM
Seosamh, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 12:39:00 PM
still charming me after another read, anne... happy day!..:) huggs!
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Date: 4/23/2013 1:08:00 AM
Nette, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 8:13:00 AM
I don't know what really what a dramatic verse is but this was really deep and made me think about all the chaos in the world and how people aren't like they used to be. Very good writing you have here Anne :) - Yours Truly
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Date: 4/22/2013 8:14:00 AM
- Nice that you visit and comments my poem. - Thank you Y.T.! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 8:07:00 AM
Life is sometime full of paradoxes - but light must always prevail over darkness. Very deep poem, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 4/22/2013 8:10:00 AM
- Nice that you visit and comments my poem. - Thank you David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 7:41:00 AM
I like the sprinkle of darkness form you here, Anne. Very good for sure!
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Date: 4/22/2013 7:47:00 AM
- Nice that you visit and comments my poem. - Thank you Caleb! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 6:12:00 AM
scary but true, i like it...
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Date: 4/22/2013 7:32:00 AM
- Nice that you visit and comments my poem. - Thank you Jonathan! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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