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---Black-Eyed Susans

black-eyed susans root on the river bank--- yellow jackets hum

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:13:00 PM

OOO... I love Susan the poet... good one..pd

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/10/2011 1:44:00 AM

Nice one.

Elaine George

Date: 7/7/2011 3:16:00 PM

I knew this was a winner when I read it the first time, Deb. Many congrats. Lainie

Edwin Baldwin

Date: 7/6/2011 11:59:00 PM

It's a beauty... so pure and simple it makes me feel like, why didn't I think of that.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2011 11:01:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Debs. I'm still struggling to write something for your latest contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 4:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie in the contest. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2011 8:51:00 AM

Coming back here, Debbie :D Super congrats on your win with this very vivid haiku :D

Kash Poet

Date: 7/3/2011 12:04:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your win in Chris's contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2011 9:49:00 PM

this was one of my faves in the contest, debs. it painted such a marvelous picture of yellows! Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2011 7:56:00 PM

congrats Debbie on your fantastico win ..my flourishing fields drowned oh..sending fireworks from seashore to celebrate your win luv..

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/2/2011 7:55:00 PM

Beautiful and evocative portrait of a natural scene. This is real poetry! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/2/2011 6:16:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of chris, Debbie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2011 5:20:00 PM

Very creative..Congrats..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/30/2011 7:50:00 AM

Yello jackets love yellow, thanks for the comment on my work.... I like you haiku my friend.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/30/2011 4:57:00 AM

nice color filled imagery, Debbie. excellent Haiku

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2011 6:55:00 PM

Very nice...pl.visit my"Raging winds"...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/29/2011 8:52:00 AM

I have some black eyed susans growing on the side of the house and those yellow jackets love to hum around them . Great haiku DEB. love phyl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/29/2011 8:34:00 AM

That last line capped this so well, Debbie :) Enjoyed this one and as for that acrostic of mine, haha I was on a weird and inspired streak there I suppose? lol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2011 4:50:00 AM

satisfaction guaranteed, debs! for chris?? smashing! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2011 11:30:00 PM

I love the picture this gives.

Don Johnson

Date: 6/28/2011 9:01:00 PM

great poem here babe:) Our yellow jackets are gum trees, south of the border, way xo, Don

Elaine George

Date: 6/28/2011 6:49:00 PM

Vivid imagery, Deb. Lainie

Cory Long

Date: 6/28/2011 4:53:00 PM

this was awfully creative nicely done. cory

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/28/2011 12:52:00 PM

black-eyed susans!!! Makes me think of my grandmother...one of the flowers that filled her yard, and I remember I loved the name of them....always thought she was teasing me when she called them by that name! love this pretty haiku!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 12:34:00 PM

well certainly vibrant Debbie ..is for Chris no doubt so good luck.. still have to check his out.. so many contests to create for I am in a dizzy tizzy today..luv..