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Flame Flickering orange glow Faint lingering warm light Fun blues, reds, playful way Feathery wisp of smoke Flowing beauty and light Fragrance burnt flame smoke scent Fades as it waste away 11/16/2015 Poetry Soup Syllable Counter Syllables Per Line: 6 6 6 6 6 6 6 - Poetry Contest: Pleiades, Please! Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Date: 11/30/2015 3:27:00 AM
Congrats Eve.. wonderful write n win!
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Date: 11/29/2015 8:39:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your fine win in Kim's contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2015 7:46:00 AM
Very good composition. Congrats Eve for the placement. Hugs. Anisha
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Date: 11/28/2015 7:53:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:32:00 PM
Eve, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE
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Date: 11/28/2015 7:41:00 AM
You've certainly captured all the colors within a flame...even to its scent. Congratulations, sweet lady.
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Date: 11/28/2015 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations Eve
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Date: 11/27/2015 7:20:00 PM
There is something so enchanting about this poem Eve. From first to last line, I was enthralled. Congratulations!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/27/2015 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, so much for your inspirational compliment and your great support. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/27/2015 6:17:00 PM
such beautiful imagery Eve I am really enjoying reading the winning poems:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/27/2015 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, so much for your compliment and your great support. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/27/2015 5:20:00 PM
Hot, Eve!!Yay I'm right below YOU....:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/27/2015 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Jill, so much for your compliment and your great support. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/27/2015 4:15:00 PM
Eve, thank you for participating in my contest! A flickering flame is a mesmerizing visual. Congrats on your win and for learning this new poetry form! Love, Kim
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/27/2015 8:13:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, so much fort the prevelage to create a poem for this form. Thank you also for placing me on your winning list I feel very honored! Hugs Eve
Date: 11/18/2015 1:06:00 AM
Eve, beautifully penned, I love it 7 and best of luck in the contest. I also want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your oil painting contest, I am very honored ~
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/18/2015 2:52:00 PM
I'm the one honored that you chose to create a piece of yourself to one of my portraits. I am the one to say thank you....
Date: 11/17/2015 7:42:00 PM
Well done Eve. I also wanted to thank you for picking my poem as a winner for your contest. Interestingly I wrote the poem before I seen your paintings. It was coincidence it fit the theme so I thought I would give it a go. I'm pleased you like it. Hugs Rick.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/17/2015 8:08:00 PM
ThanK You, Richard, it was my top pick on the girl painting. All the poems were wonderful but yours hit home. I posted a Blog and yours is highlighted in green :) Hugs Eve
Date: 11/17/2015 3:03:00 PM
Wow this is great Eve...good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/17/2015 5:19:00 AM
Imaginative and impressive, dear Eve! Good luck!
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