~ (~) ~ If You Will ~ (~) ~ (Part #1 of 2) ~ (~) ~
~ (~) There was this poll, it stated would you rather be informed of your punctuation
mistakes publicly or through private message with the helper of your punctuation mistakes or
yes maybe even not... . (~) ~
~ (~) My answer: (~) ~
~ (~) Out of the choices I voted openly yes... . Here's why... ! (~) ~
~ (~) How can I grow individually if I deny the help in doing so whether it offered openly or
as I have found from time to time, a bit covertly, even furthermore or entirely IF YOU WILL...
. (~) ~
~ (~) Gives me as well if not just for the punctuation, or grammar, use of metaphor, any
thing in regards to such. Such it is for me when I write, wish to learn and grow into being a
being, writer EQUAL human child of God, that strives to be (H)onest, ((O))pen heart mind body,
soul, to be growing ever more (((W)))illing-in these-strivings... . (~) ~
~ (~) Great poll friend... . (~) ~
~ (~) It Also helps me to offer the reasoning as to why the punctuation's or metaphor or
grammar from time to time was so presented as it was in what the person commenting has
offered with the said suggestions for me one themselves as they were presented... . (~) ~
~ (~) Helping the reader FOR the next time to read if they so choose or if you will or might just
stumble upon, through looking at the comments themselves. So they know as well the
reasoning, denial, of the suggestion by the write and why, or the acceptance of it, or if you
would consider even furthermore, both parties coming to an equal compromise PEACEFULLY
BOTH GROWING TOGETHER... . (~)
(~) ~Thereby it being open or not open as a suggestion, the way that it is handled by both
parties can be viewed and everybody as well has the opportunity to grow furthermore if they
so choose... . (~) ~
~ (~) As I stated above I have no problem with receiving an offering, denial, no matter what
it may be, it all teaches, in many ways myself, them or another if open to it... . (~) ~
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~ (~) Thank you for the poll friend... . (~) ~
~ (~) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T2NEU6Xf7lM (~) ~
Copyright © James Long | Year Posted 2010
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