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That Fright filled sight on the TV screen Images impossible, harrowing and surreal That vivid blue sky, the silver the gleaming People dead, people Jumping, People running and screaming Fireballs with colours that didn't seem true The planes the impact what could anyone do? To save the people trapped high in the sky Thousands of souls didn't deserve to die The day the world changed because of terror Not for the good and not for the better The sickening sight of the towers crashing down Freefalling down smashing the ground Debris and dust like monsters rising up Engulfing block by block Consuming the city refusing to stop Revealing scenes of a living hell Just for once Manhattan not looking so swell You will always remember what you were doing that day On that very sad blue skied Septembers day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/18/2013 1:46:00 PM
Leigh, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:17:00 AM
Guy's thanks so much for your feedback which has been graciously received. I also very much appreciate your warm welcome and look forward to checking out your work. Thanks again, feeling pretty inspired this morning hope you all enjoy your day! greetings from a rainy Cornwall today, Leigh :)
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:37:00 PM
Leigh, a heartfelt write. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/17/2013 12:10:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Leigh! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2013 10:11:00 AM
I know I won't forget. I was 35 min away from there that day. A painfully scary day. Respect to you for this piece.
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