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8 Legged Freak

I don't think it's just a nightmare, Gradually I've succumb to fear. For the spiderman has come tonight, To take all that I hold dear. His hairy legs extend their grasp, And suddenly I'm mesmerized. For no matter which way, his monstrous fangs, Burrow its venom deep inside. The spiderman has come tonight, Or maybe they're just foolish dreams. But it really doesn't matter what I think, For reality has burst at the seams. An intricate web so craftfully designed, For no other purpose but to feed. A frightening feature and ghastly creature, There is no doubt he'll do the deed. The 8 legged freak has come for me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 1:06:00 AM
I'm not a spider fan, lol. Congrats Nick, for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 6/26/2016 12:15:00 AM
NICK,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/26/2016 12:14:00 AM
LIKE THE MOVIE,,, THIS IS AWESOME... LINDA
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Date: 6/24/2016 12:00:00 PM
Sounds like a creepy nightmare... ewww I hate spiders!
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Date: 6/24/2016 10:32:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Nick. :)
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Date: 6/24/2016 12:08:00 AM
Nick,, well done, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. Welcome to poetry soup...*skat*
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