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5th September

It has been raining All the day. But now silence. Stillness Where just before The drops a rhythmic downwards breeze Poured, And gave us quiet melody to our thoughts, Are suddenly no more. The trees, stilted now, Waving hesitant. This new, patternless breeze And our lives are a little more boring As the clouds sweep past And leave us alone. No accompaniment seems to last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/27/2009 1:32:00 AM
Your work is deserving of much more attention... the images here are vibrant, and your phrasing is sublime. Well done! Best wishes, Keith
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