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5 Days

first day i didn't know your name just wordering how it well feel to talk worderful girl who makes me smile, secound i looked in eyes love i never felt beauty i never saw made speechless all i can say is wow, third day i herd her cry just wanted to tell everything as going to be ok i wanted to hold her in my arm, forth i heard you speak i wanted to listen to what everything she have to say fifth day i wanted to know everything about her that day looking her is like watching te sun peaceful relaxing in made me smile

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Date: 8/16/2009 6:33:00 AM
just like a love story, i could have read some more. Thanks for your comment, yes we live in a painful unfreindly world, and its up to us how we decide to live our lives. Abe
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