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#56

State of hopelessness Inability to sleep And downheartedness

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Date: 2/13/2009 7:06:00 PM
Hi Joseph. I just read all 56 Senryu's. You're very good at writing these. So few words that express quite a bit. My favorites were 18, 30, 32, 43 and 47. I had to laugh at #34. 36 is a good one. 39 seemed sad to me. 56 sounded like you were apart from her. How true on #48. You are hiding behind a smile in #50. 51 & 56 - I know the feeling well. Keep on writing...
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