5:44 Am

Holding my wife's breasts, Spooning before the alarm, All's right in my world

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Casarah Nance

Date: 5/14/2014 7:08:00 PM

Every time I read your stuff you shock and surprise me and make me smile and laugh at loud, you rock.

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 9:40:00 PM

Why thank you. That is quite an eloquent compliment.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2014 6:47:00 PM

Dear Mark, It's a blessing that you have a true love in your life. Cherish her and you may be one of the lucky couples and share your love forever. Lovely poem! Carolyn

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 9:39:00 PM

I try to cherish her, because of the idea of forever. Mine is the only Christian denomination that teaches that the marriage relationship can potentially extend into the afterlife.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/14/2014 1:26:00 PM

A comfy, cozy, familiar scenario expressed well in this Haiku Xx~Xx

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 2:05:00 PM

Thanks for commenting. You might also like Afterglow, which is sort of the other side of the coin.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2014 8:13:00 PM

oh this is really neat. That is just what is all right in the world for you. (Not crazy about the title. It's a bit too early in the a.m. haha)

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 12:09:00 AM

My alarm was set for 5:45, so this was the lazily awake moment holding my wife this morning just prior. Check out Afterglow, my haiku from a few minutes aglow, ......I mean ago.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2014 9:36:00 AM

Sensual write, Mark

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 12:30:00 AM

I did one tonight also called Afterglow. It goes well with 5:44 AM.

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/13/2014 12:15:00 PM

Tried to make it more sentimental than vulgar.