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I stepped through the early morning door into a liquid-laden Spring-scene. A three-quarter moon gazed down wearing it's gold ring of water The air, chill, though a burdensome thick humidity hangs like a canvas bag of sand waiting to drop onto the stage No bird was heard; all perched quietly beneath puffy cloud pockets; waiting for lightening to pierce and make them bleed.

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:11:00 PM
M.L. what an interesting write. I love reading your poetry. It makes a person think about paying more attention to nature. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 8:31:00 AM
Then, it's done its job. Thanks for dropping by to read and comment.

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