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4AM

I stepped through the
early morning door into a liquid-laden Spring-scene.

A three-quarter moon
gazed down wearing
it's gold ring of water

The air, chill, though
a burdensome thick
humidity hangs like a canvas bag

of sand
waiting to drop
onto the stage

No bird was heard;
all perched quietly beneath puffy cloud pockets;
waiting for lightening to pierce

and make them bleed.

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  1. Date: 4/18/2015 6:11:00 PM
    M.L. what an interesting write. I love reading your poetry. It makes a person think about paying more attention to nature. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

    Kiser Avatar M. L. Kiser
    Date: 4/20/2015 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Then, it's done its job. Thanks for dropping by to read and comment.
  1. Date: 2/22/2014 4:14:00 PM
    Hi I love liquid laden, gold ring of water, canvas bag I love this one so much You say so much by not saying much Tony Kikr

    Kiser Avatar M. L. Kiser
    Date: 4/20/2015 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, Tony. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.