4 Lonesome

4 lonesome Little hell we live in babe, but we can change its style, expect believe and just be brave, put a smile upon your dial, find love again on the eyes depend, make contact and you will own, always someone just round the bend, life there is better, be up an going... Brian Strand Contest Name YOUR CHOICE ONCE MORE any theme/form max of 16 lines

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Judy Ball

Date: 2/15/2012 3:42:00 PM

Life is what we make it. It can be hell on earth or it can be an experience from which we can learn. It's up to us. Good write. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2011 9:43:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your interesting work..Love can be found and sometimes in the strangest places..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2011 5:58:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Don. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2011 9:18:00 PM

Fantastic write Don, It takes the whole poem as one complete piece to get the full effect, perfect in my eyes!! Great job!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/9/2011 5:26:00 PM

nice rhyme Don

Nancy Jones

Date: 11/9/2011 4:49:00 PM

awake and alive. awake IS alive. how ya look at it determines how ya feel about it, eh? I love this poem, Don Johnson, will post it on my wall of fame at work :) Digya~N

Shannon Deane

Date: 11/9/2011 3:47:00 PM

Lovely write Don...hoping all is well with you...luv shannon