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40 Days

I trust you with my weaknesses, you crush them with your charm, it's been forty feckless days since you sounded the alarm, then as you ran for cover I'm left naked and exposed, bombs fall as confetti, Earth cracks beneath my toes. I cut my knees on impact as I crawl for your protection, Apocalypse can't hold me back for all this devastation, seems heavenly compared to life upon this land without you, these forty feckless days are devoid of any value. The sky's ablaze with dangers, with crippled promises, but if loving you is fatal then let life end like this.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/25/2013 10:43:00 PM
Interesting poem. I like.
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:25:00 AM
To love a "crippled promise", I'm not sure would really be worth dying for. Because, honestly, would that "crippled promise" die for you? Thought-provoking lines. Excellent job!
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Date: 6/25/2013 5:58:00 AM
Nice poem. Enjoyed the read.
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