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401 West Oley

THERE WERE 4 ROOMS, 0 TOYS, AND ENOUGH PEOPLE TO EQUAL 1 HEART BEAT MY GRANDMOTHER AND I RESIDED AT 401 WEST OLEY WHERE MEMORIES WERE CREATED AND MADE FOOD TASTED BETTER THAN ANY 5 STAR RESTAURANT YOU COULD NAME AND THE SONGS MY GRANDMOTHER SANG NEVER PLAYED ON THE RADIO IN REPETITION MY GRANDMOTHERS CARD TABLE WAS A TOWERING FORTRESS WITH A MOAT SURROUNDING IT SHE WAS THE WIZ GIVING KNOWLEDGE TO THOSE WHO ASKED FOR SOME 401 WEST OLEY WAS MANY DIFFERENT PLACES ALL OF THEM WERE GREAT BUT THE BEST WAS HOME

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Date: 9/27/2016 2:32:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Willard. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 2:39:00 PM
Hi Willard, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Willard George
Date: 9/26/2016 5:03:00 PM
Definitely appreciate the love. Any advice?
Date: 9/25/2016 12:23:00 PM
First great poem, Willard, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Willard George
Date: 9/26/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for the the love. Any advice.

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