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30th September

nothern hemisphere a month where nature begins to die the lust of new year begets the last day of september a birth gone the cull of nature another baby born today © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/31/2022 7:46:00 AM

Love how you portrayed the circle of life here, Harry ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2022 3:13:00 PM

I see this one got a win, harry. Since I can't see any new poems, I came to this one to say belated congratulations.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/6/2022 6:55:00 AM

Planting season for the southern hemisphere, eh Harry? Good luck with your garden :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/4/2022 5:52:00 AM

Light overcoming..A dark time arriving Harry A sharp contrast is shown in this apt piece.' I am seeing the long shadows, in my mind on The nullabor in June, on an early morning start Out from Penong we were, still a dirt road then Got stuck West from Yalata, and went back there to get shackles made to replace the broken ones, that had stranded us.' A whirl of Memories now around me.'

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/3/2022 5:46:00 PM

Just as the sundown is the ending of the yesterday, the sunrise is the beginning of something new. Congratulations on your win Harry.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/1/2022 9:54:00 AM

So true Harry thank you for sharing my friend. Clever as always referencing the new birth to the season...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2022 6:21:00 AM

Nature seasons, one dies for one To be reborn congratulations on your win Harry my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/27/2022 9:08:00 AM

Wow, it is such a lovely expression! The demise of the previous season is a prerequisite for every natural reborn, Harry. Be blessed

Bill Baker

Date: 9/25/2022 5:31:00 PM

Interesting form, well written, Harry. I like the subject you chose and the twist in the final line. Thanks for sharing this unique Korean form of poetry, my friend. Bill

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/25/2022 10:39:00 AM

The beginning of each season is indeed the birth of something new... This is an interesting and unique take on the theme of changing seasons... Fantastic work, Harry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2022 9:41:00 PM

so is line two the other story you were talking about? That's so cool.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/24/2022 6:15:00 PM

So many layers to this short poem. Congratulations on your excellent win. SuZ

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 9/24/2022 4:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your stunning win! :)Paulette

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/24/2022 3:35:00 AM

Wow, Harry, this is artistic brilliance and made me pause to consider your words. Amazing write!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/23/2022 7:55:00 PM

Harry! Your poetic artistry is so lovely here! Pangie xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2022 7:49:00 PM

Was this a baby in your own family? I hope so. I was looking for poems about personal memories. Good one, harry . Congrats

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/22/2022 4:17:00 AM

What a beautiful way to put it Harry! A poetic cycle! Happy Thursday!!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/22/2022 1:45:00 AM

Fancy, a baby is born, Thank God for that.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/21/2022 12:07:00 PM

Hello Harry Horseman, yes a baby is born today. Yet babies are born evrey day. Enjoy your day my friend.

Anil Deo

Date: 9/21/2022 11:37:00 AM

Sir Harry, you left a powerful compliment on my recent poem, Absences. This Sijo also reveals depth, may, greater depth about Time, Cycles, Relativity. Shalom shalom of Jesus, The One. Amen. much love

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/21/2022 10:02:00 AM

A lovely verse, Harry. I believe I will be attempting this interesting new form. Best wishes for the contest.:)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/21/2022 3:24:00 AM

You're in luck, Harry, because you'll soon be experiencing spring and summer while the rest of us will soon be bracing ourselves for colder weather. Excellent work here. Best of luck to you in the contest!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/20/2022 11:41:00 PM

It's certainly starting to die here now Harry, you've got spring and summer to welcome. Tom