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30 Days After

30 DAYS AFTER Congratulations! For you're 30 day straight run Watch what happens now my friend Your life will be so much fun The habit you formed some time ago Thinking positive every day You're going to realise now my friend Negative thoughts have gone away You worked so hard, it took great strength You did not stop at any length When negative thoughts came to say hi You did kick them out with an outstanding goodbye Now you will see that they hardly return And when they do, you will be unconcerned You have now built your mind to be courageously strong You have mastered you're mind, you can not go wrong See how easy life will be, your mind is toned and you are free To reach your goals, your destiny This 30 day test, my friend is no fake For you now have a habit, THAT'S TOO HARD TO BRAKE!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/18/2009 3:59:00 AM
You are not just a poet, but also possess the gift of a motivational speaker. You should try.
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Date: 11/20/2009 4:12:00 PM
My mind is still a purring Harley Davidson, sitting halfway between departure and destination, ready to neither be master, or mastered. thank you for offering the challenge.
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Date: 11/11/2009 2:52:00 PM
Wow it played in my head like a song thats pretty cool and thanx for reading Heaven on Earth Im glad you liked
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:43:00 AM
Ending on a positive note! Excellent! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 10/30/2009 4:10:00 PM
nice! I like the way you write... very much :)
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:07:00 PM
It would be nice to take these tests, then move on >> James
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