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2 of You

My face on the ground, My lungs are bleeding, Faster and faster My hearts pleading. What is this being? And what is it seeking? I cant find a door, Or an out that im needing. So far ahead but my time is receding.. Lonely and broken, Hiding and numb. This deamon. THIS DEAMON! Why have you come? Grey eyes catch a glimps Of his pulsing red light.. Kill me JUST KILL ME!! Please do it tonight. Im over these shadows That keep me from rest. I swear you can take it; My dieing last breath. He laughed and he laughed, And he tore at his sides.. He screamed, "I AM YOU"! You're lost in your mind! A look at that face, And I knew he was right. Fighting myself, Everyday, everynight. "I see him" i say, "I know you are there!" But no one believes me. Know one here cares. Two in my mind, We live and he'll stay. Instanity peaking Brining darkness to day. Help doesnt exist In the mind of your own, It started as one, But 2 always go home.

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/21/2016 5:10:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Dallas. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 12:19:00 AM

Dallas, FA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2016 6:21:00 PM

Dallas,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"