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2-45 In the Morning

2-45 in the morning, Wide awake and needing sleep. Waiting on the concourse, For a flight to anywhere. 2-45 in the morning, My life in an old backpack. No one here to say goodbye, Ain't never coming back. 2-45 in the morning, Got a ride out to Brazil. Don't leave 'til dawns first light, Got a few hours to kill. 2-45 in the morning, Din't mean to hit that guy. He didn't say a word to me, Just looked me in the eye. 2-45 in the morning, Got to cool my temper down. Trouble found me out again, I think it's my middle name. 2-45 in the morning, No time to wait for the plane. If the law find me in here, It's back to prison again. 2-45 in the morning, The streets are dark and cold. I'm forty years old tomorrow, But I'm feeling really old. 2-45 in the morning, Those guys look mean up ahead, They look like they've found trouble, When you read this I may be dead. © Dave Timperley 2012

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Date: 4/20/2014 4:52:00 AM
Hhaha!!!am glad you still here!
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/20/2014 2:51:00 PM
Just glad I'm not that guy. Anger is never a good medium for sorting trouble. God Bless
Date: 10/20/2012 8:21:00 AM
Creative lines...I hope not based on your life but just a poetic work..Enjoyed reading for it got my attention and held it..Sara
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Dave Timperley
Date: 10/20/2012 2:57:00 PM
Just a poetic work Sara, but it gave me a chilly feeling when I wrote it. Thanks for stopping by. God Bless. Dave.
Date: 10/14/2012 5:05:00 PM
O s**t!! Pardon the french...I got chills reading this to the end. I literally felt that you would be dead...stupid me! How could that be, since you posted the poem? That's how convincing this write is my friend. I love it, love it, love it!!! One love. Joy Wells
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Dave Timperley
Date: 10/15/2012 2:16:00 PM
Wow! when I get a reaction like that i've gone done somethin' good...But it was just a poem that came out of a sleepless night. Thanks for passing by and your french is excused. God Bless. D.
Date: 9/23/2012 5:14:00 AM
You need to sleep(:) love your style narrarator tone said a lot about his work blessed annie
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Dave Timperley
Date: 9/23/2012 7:06:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Annie, it was just something that came into my head. I enjoyed writing it although it is a bit dark. God Bless. Dave.
Date: 9/23/2012 5:08:00 AM
A powerful 2:45 a.m. write...Sometimes the pen seems our only friend...I hope you turned around and walked the other way...Good writing...I say! Cynthia
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Dave Timperley
Date: 9/23/2012 7:11:00 AM
It was not a confession from my past , just a poem. I would probably have walked away, but I can see the realism in it from my past, especially my army past. This may have given me ideas for some future scribblings. Thanks for dropping by Cynthia. God Bless. Dave.

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