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24h of September

The Sun shines upon autumn breezes The leaves are all waving goodbye The seasons will soon change yet again For me, I shall walk along ancient forest paths Contemplating all the seasons gone by Each fall brings the end To dreams that used to be Whispering loves, mingle with tainted mists The season of introspection The season of my birth, and demise The waterways will flow to eternity As I shall march onwards bravely Knowing there in no future Beyond this wistful walk Where nature is sure to consume me Memories buried under fallen leaves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/4/2014 10:30:00 PM
maybe it is my mood tonight but i could feel being consumed by nature. i love that whispering loves, mingle with tainted mists. :) oh look i just read ur comments guess i'm not the only one who liked that ;-P
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2014 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, this poem was personal so means more to me!!!
Date: 9/28/2013 3:49:00 PM
Outstanding imagery and word use... '...whispering loves, mingle with tainted mists,' cool assonance and alliteration! BRAVO Arthur!! Best wishes, Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2014 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Keith, missed this, haven't seen you around lately, I hope you are in good health and doing well!!!
Date: 9/24/2013 10:45:00 PM
Great write, loved it ....Seren
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