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24 Hours To Live

24 hours to live…I need to hurry and come up with a plan It’s only right to “worry” because I haven’t been half the man 23 hours to live…An hour gone by, I wanna break down and cry; Because I know with twenty-three hours to go, and I will die! 22 hours to live…I sat down to make amends with my Mother While I was there, although he didn’t care, I asked forgiveness from my brother. I forgave my Mother and she forgave me; 18 hours to live…I called my uncle and aunts to tell them I hate what we have gone through. 16 hours to live…I visited my sister and we reminisced about growing up together The fights, the fun; the tears and laughter will be cherished forever! 18 hours to live…I visited my Momma’s grave, and told her I’d be seeing her soon. I then placed a white rose I chose, on her headstone and cried that afternoon 13 hours to live…I called up each one of my baby girls and asked them to come see me I told them they were my world and asked them to accept my apology I spent five hours with my daughters ‘because I had so much to say I told them about life and the birds and the bees; about the importance of an Education, sacrifice and family. I kissed and held Jasmine, Brianna and Lillian, then told them they had to go; I reminded them to always pray, ‘cause there will come a day, when I’ll see Them again, beyond the rainbow! 8 hours to live…My Peanut Butter came over and we made passionate love like never Before. I told her she was my best friend and her love I’ll always adore. We held one another, kissed, touched, laughed as the hours ticked by. I got out of bed, kissed her forehead and for once I was the one to cry! She then left the house knowing I needed to be alone I couldn’t help but notice the time and my racing heart beneath my breastbone! 3 hours to live…Alone in my room, I fell to my knees I prayed to my God to heal me my spiritual disease I asked for forgiveness for all the sins I’ve ever done I even asked God if he would make it his business to accept me as his son I prayed, I talked to Him well into the final hour 0 hours to live…No more pain. I felt my life force drain And then awoke in Heaven surrounded by white flowers!!! Note: Entry for Waylayee Whitlock's "If I had One Last Day To Live" Contest

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Date: 2/25/2011 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st Place win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:13:00 AM
Hehe had to come again and read it another time.... You did hit my heart... I do hope your life is beautiful and that you have no regrets...
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:07:00 AM
This is touching and wont be forgotten... You deserve this win very much... Amazing it is.. Love it, Sami.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:14:00 PM
Jimmy, congratulations on attaining first place in Waylayee's contest with this fine entry.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:00:00 AM
Awesome Jimmy to see you at the top. Congratulations on your poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/21/2011 10:00:00 PM
amazing write and congratulations on your stupendous win. Love Caroline
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Date: 2/19/2011 2:06:00 PM
You have really thought about this! Congrad's on your BIG win and I wish you had never had such hard thoughts come into your head a wish you a better life full of love. Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win in the contest! Once again, you hit this way out of the ball park! This excellent Kyrielle has and will forever be a most memorable write, JAM. Much love, PB
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations Jimmy. You certainly spent those hours gainfully. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:08:00 PM
Awesome Jimmy and sure deserved this top notch. Many congratulations.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of walayee, Jimmy
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:47:00 PM
Wow...this was so powerful and intense! A wonderful piece you did, Jimmy! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:39:00 PM
Super congrats Jimmy on your first place win in Lay's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:39:00 PM
Congratz on you 2nd place entry. cool write
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Date: 8/16/2010 10:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Poetic Warlock on your win in Audrey's fine contest with this terrific piece, most deserved >> James
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Date: 8/16/2010 2:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Congrats on your 2nd place win: )
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, The Poetic warlock
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:06:00 PM
Congrats Poetic Warlock on your winning poem in Audrey's contest with this exceptional write..enjoy another win this Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in Audrey's contest, Jimmy! Awesome poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:37:00 AM
Hey Jam, Thanks for submitting your wonderful entry for my first sponsored contest. And congratulations on your 2nd Place win! Awesome write, Popi! Love, PB
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Date: 7/6/2010 1:51:00 AM
This is such a marvelous approach to Audrey's contest, Jimmy! It's very touching-- I definitely liked how you made it into a countdown--makes it more meaningful and gave it a greater impact! Very well done-- and that last line was totally beautiful-- I think your last day was very well worth it--bravo for this write!! --nikko :)
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Date: 7/1/2010 1:39:00 PM
A brilliant write for the time Audrey has her contest in July.. a sure winner my friend.. seen from a very deep perspective... enjoyed Jimmy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. in LUV...
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