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24/12 24/12 at age 5 Christmas Eve by age five, an eve of my parents’ plan. In glittering dress so naïve, kisses from kith and kin rain. back home, my wish list in my stockings, through chimney Santa Claus to come, good boy Jenish went to sleep singing, “silent night, holy night, all is calm, Santa, you come”. 24/12 at age 18 Christmas Eve by age eighteen ultimate fun, a great sense in teen. *** ,booze,from evening five ten. my friends, I ,crack fire works by all den in richest dress, bothering others least. In Church “impressing: our goal” silently for bad boy Jenish, no Santa his eve .no gift. Slept,Know not when gently 24/12 at age 27 Christmas Eve by age twenty seven Me and my wife. Alone we were. a silk saree for her, beauty! Divine! my dress ,all her choice, I wore. “her choice” made me a Gentleman, for my wife, in-laws and their big family. My wife tried crackers,great is my woman. atom bombs, hydrogen bombs, rockets no silly. her courage instilled great confidence in me. all bombs cracked noisily. Stood fearless my Victoria! My darling by my side, I would dare the sky for we. This time, I believed Santa would gift me and Victoria for, jenish and victoria, the good boy and girl. My sweet heart wrote a wish list to Santa I pretended as if I sleep, once she slept I whirled to unroll the list written for Santa, “Santa, pray for me and Jenish. We need another Jenish and another Victoria”. I saw a great woman in her. Slept peacefully Jenish. I dream the kids of my Cinderella,Victoria. rest for same contest next year…………. Started writing by 20-11-2013. completed by 26-11-2013 by Jenish Soosai Anthony for Poet. Debbie Guzzi‘s contest “Happy Holidays”.

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Date: 12/12/2013 7:57:00 PM
I love the three parts......three ages in time of this holiday poem!! What a clever way to do the contest! Well done !
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Date: 12/13/2013 2:10:00 AM
Carrie,Appreciation from great people really motivates me to perform better.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/12/2013 11:56:00 AM
Great concept for the verse, something personal, you keep up the good work! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2013 2:06:00 AM
Debbie, I am really very proud of this win. (: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/12/2013 5:59:00 AM
congratulations Jenish xx
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Date: 12/13/2013 2:05:00 AM
Thank you friend. (: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/12/2013 4:13:00 AM
A good win my friend. ..hugs. ..Linda
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Date: 12/13/2013 2:04:00 AM
Linda its great to see you in my page. Long time no see! (: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/11/2013 11:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Jenish
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Date: 12/13/2013 2:03:00 AM
Thank you Dr.Mehta. (: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/1/2013 2:38:00 PM
A personal verse which is what I so enjoy, take heart, we write and write and as we do so diligently we learn! I re-write almost constantly. The first time usually just gets the concept out of YOU! You are a fine person and that is what's most important. You know 2 or more? languages and I certainly bow to you! Light & Love
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Date: 12/2/2013 3:36:00 AM
Its really great to read your encouraging words Debbie.Thank you.With great respect for you. (: ) Jenish.
Date: 11/26/2013 2:43:00 PM
A very interesting and heartfelt Christmas poem that you have written here! I enjoyed it! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...By the way, thank you very much for giving me a first place in your contest! I really appreciate the recognition!
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Date: 12/2/2013 3:33:00 AM
Thank you.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 11/21/2013 9:12:00 AM
Hello, Jenish... love the pen name....wishing you luck with this amazing holiday treat. interesting dates to hold near the heart. .hugs..Linda
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Date: 11/21/2013 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Linda.(: )Jenish.
Date: 11/20/2013 9:54:00 AM
ohh, the distinct stages of a hoilday finely woven all through a mood that simply delights, jenish!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:10:00 AM
nette, thanks for the visit and your encouragement.Your poems are of a different class and style. (: ) Jenish.

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