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if i had 24 hours to live 
id probaby chill with the smith and go west where i can rest my head from getting touched like the rest
id grab a judge and tell him its i his last 24 , knock open his door,
tell him i wasnt there for the raw but the truth. 

Nobody can touch cuz the kid got touched

nobody smiling cu z the nerves s wilding, this aitn nothing new

if i had 24 id just think i had 48 sp i can double take my life '

 if i whad 24 to live i d relive my life by every hour. 
Id refuge a bunch of thugs 
feed the poor
hand out bottle sof coke to the kids,
look at eery women ive loved and tell her this si what it is.
man can feel my pain so the money is the cover up in green like kemp with a dutch 

 if i had 24 id id do *****to make u think u relly living

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