2023

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For Andrea's 2023 contest

2023 a year some infants didn’t see ~ born after countdown on new years eve

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/9/2024 8:52:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful write again. Cheers.... Have a blessed day writing away..................

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2024 9:17:00 AM

Thank you Paula, I was delighted to just about scrape into the winners circle with this one, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2024 11:21:00 AM

I really like this. just wish you had made it more personal about yourself. As a monoku in general, I think this is perfect. Congrats in my contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/8/2024 11:30:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, it does give lots of insight into the way my mind works! Lol, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/4/2024 10:21:00 AM

Precious! Do you think they hear the tick tock? I recall a contest she had senryu --holiness ensues yesterday you're one with God newborn one day old- I won 2nd place! GL

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/4/2024 12:44:00 PM

I’m not sure if the babies hear the tick tock, or the mother’s time it well lol! Clever senryu, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/3/2024 8:59:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful write. Good Luck... Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/3/2024 10:11:00 AM

Thanks so much Paula, trying to get back into contest mode, god knows why? lol! Cheers David

Terry Flood

Date: 1/2/2024 3:39:00 PM

Luck little buggers! Enjoyed with a grin, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/2/2024 11:42:00 PM

Thanks Terry, Amazing how many babies are born a minute after midnight on New Year’s Day, I wonder? yes some are lucky to just miss 2023, cheers David