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When I was six my life fell apart I told no one Even though it tore me apart My reality and nightmares became one As I shivered in silence in the dark As my parents lost their spark Through masked smiles I was ten And on my way to becoming a man, Raised strongly by my mother But always resembled my father I strived to find the person in me As I befriended my pen At eight teen I fell a victim Fell prey fed to predators called friends As they had my dignity on their hands I pursued God who became my beam For I had grasped life’s fundamentals And off were the empty smiles 19, awaits for me tomorrow The last year that I may be a teen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/15/2012 6:12:00 AM
Many happy returns Ronny. Manhood beckons with your own decisions awaiting you xx
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Date: 5/11/2012 8:03:00 PM
Wow Happy Birthday and fantastic poem as well..Patrick
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Date: 5/11/2012 4:41:00 AM
Happy birthday !!!!!!! :) :) :) :) - birthday hug to you. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:05:00 PM
Hi Ronny, i know how it is to fall victims to them so called friends... i dislike it very much..tomorrow is my Fathers birthday, and my granddaughter... lol..makes me sound old.. love your poem..I will be here to wish you a happy birthday tomorrow.. xox... from Texas... yours truly the Poet Destroyer
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Date: 5/10/2012 6:12:00 AM
Only 19.... and written so good, well done Ronny. - AND, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOMORROW, HAVE A HAPPY DAY!!!! - oxox big hug to you from Anne-Lise
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Ronny Madonsela
Date: 5/10/2012 6:26:00 AM
thanx anne , i plan to enyoy every second of tomorow

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