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1975 we sat silently on the porch I was outta breath from running children ran in those days some of us would wait on the porch for the sky to stop I was wearing a light blue jacket you were on my arm we watched the sun calculate its position and the sound of the pretzel man returning watching you on my arm watching me alone digging up the bones of birds I buried last week carrying my clipboard sketches of the newly planted trees who's leaves were stars I had markers, pens, pencils and chalk all the time I was so thin then when the days of our lives would drag on and the gravity of summers would destroy time passing

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Date: 1/21/2012 4:48:00 PM
Congrats, Robert! Great poem. It takes me back to a simpler time. I was born in 1972 and remember when children played outside, exploring and using their imaginations. No computers or video games! Like you, I could be outside for hours just discovering the world. Kids today miss out on that kind of freedom. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. Blessings, Rhonda :)
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Robert Sciasci
Date: 1/22/2012 9:31:00 PM
Thanks! Rhonda :)
Date: 1/18/2012 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Robert Sciasci
Date: 1/18/2012 4:44:00 AM
thanks
Date: 1/17/2012 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Robert. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Robert Sciasci
Date: 1/17/2012 7:31:00 AM
oh wow thats great Thanks!!
Date: 1/15/2012 10:04:00 PM
I am fortunate to have read this one today! The year BEFORE I was born (1976), but still, I DiG IT!
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Robert Sciasci
Date: 1/16/2012 5:26:00 AM
thanks!
Date: 8/12/2010 7:52:00 AM
lovely write
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