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16 and Love Lost

Life like a boat can sink pretty fast. I guess you have to enjoy it while it lasts. I fell pretty hard in just that day. I didn't only loose my heart I gave it away. I'm only 16 but had alot to feel. For a girl that helped me to reveal. The reason why I'm still here. Now I'm gone it's still not clear. Now I have no one to help me cure this pain. No one to loose nothing to gain. She was my plan A and plan B. The only thing I wanted to see. Work out in life I'd be happy with that. But once so beautiful than turned to crap. I don't know why she held my hand through think and thin. To just one day throwing my love in the bin. Things went tong so dam fast. But now I'm liven in the past. And the only thing that can change is. Me....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/8/2024 9:10:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:20:00 PM
ryan, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:23:00 PM
Ryan, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 2/8/2010 12:25:00 PM
I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Ryan. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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