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Liner hits iceberg , a titanic disaster My entry into Raul's contest " Six Word Masterpiece "

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Date: 1/4/2010 2:06:00 PM
A true masterpiece, James! Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Raul's contest! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 12/30/2009 7:01:00 AM
Congrats! As always, a beautiful composition! HUgs , Robin HAPPY 2010!!
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:54:00 AM
congratulations James. Never even saw this one. Glad youare a winner so I could. Great job.
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Date: 12/27/2009 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest, James, well deserved. Best wishes to you and your family for a happy and healthy new year 2010! Thanks for your ongoing support and encouragment on my poetry and for taking the time to read it. Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 12/26/2009 8:58:00 AM
I knew this would be a winner the first time I read it. Congratulations on placing third in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Blessings to you for your ongoing encouragement. Have a good day. Karen
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Date: 12/26/2009 8:44:00 AM
great and congrats! happy holidays!
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Date: 12/26/2009 6:07:00 AM
Congrats James on your third place win.. so glad u did not change it after all ... great write.. congrats again.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie
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Date: 12/26/2009 3:32:00 AM
Merry Christmas James and CONGRATULATIONS! on your win in Raul's contest with this powerful 6 word story. James! I wish to thank you for all your support and kind comments on my wirting in the past year and wish you all the very best in the New Year. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/26/2009 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest James.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/25/2009 11:03:00 PM
James, Merry Christmas and congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 12/22/2009 4:19:00 AM
I think you have a winner here, Although I shall try this contest myself as well...Well done James. This was an epic tale indeed.....Thank you for your kind comments on my work....Taz
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Date: 12/21/2009 3:10:00 PM
why did i see 2012 instead of 1912? jhl
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Date: 12/21/2009 2:46:00 PM
This was Epic. Many will be able to relate to this one because of the movie. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:29:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest James...Raul
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Date: 12/20/2009 4:56:00 PM
I like the active way you conveyed your thoughts in this one. The multi-purpose use of titanic is wonderful. Good luck in the contest! Karen
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Date: 12/20/2009 4:56:00 PM
Love this James...so few words yet, has so much impact. Good luck in Raul's contest....thanks so much for sharing! Also thanks for taking the time to read my poetry and your always kind comments are deeply appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 12/20/2009 3:03:00 PM
Great entry for Raul's contest.. did u know HG submitted something similar to this write? all good but just did not know if u wanted to be made aware of it... excellent ... My entry was Disenchanted which u already read ..this seems like it will also be a fun contest for Raul to judge... thankxxx ever so much for your many terrific comments on all my posting tonight... apprefciate your valued input...happy Sunday ... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 12/20/2009 7:42:00 AM
A day in history, not to be forgotten. Great write for the contest! ~ Good luck, and Happy Holidays, James!!~ Love, Carrie
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