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11:11 and 1:11pm

11:11 and 1:11pm These are the times.  The times I make a wish.  The time I tell my friends to make a wish and that I've made mine.  I do not miss these two times.  Only because I want him to come see me.  My one and only love.  The boy that keeps be flowing.  The inspiration to many lines and poems.  11:11 and 1:11pm are sacred to me.  I wait all night for 11:11pm.  I wait all day or 1:11pm When they come I wish upon a star.  They say these times mean nothing.  They do not believe as I do.  I believe if you want something to happen in time then wish upon these times.  This is not a happy nor sad poem.  This is not a poem that says anything except one thing.  Wish upon a time.  Post a comment.

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Date: 8/8/2011 7:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Benita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:26:00 PM
Thank you all. Thanks most to my boyfriend Nathaniel. Its all due to him.
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Date: 8/7/2011 9:07:00 PM
Very impressive expressions, Benita
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:19:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/6/2011 11:13:00 PM
Thanks a lot :) took me 2 minutes to write :)
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Date: 8/6/2011 6:26:00 AM
ah wishes always makeds good poetry, i like this
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