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10 Little Kids

10 little kids are messing with twine one got strangled and then there were nine. 9 little kids are hooking up bait one took a bite and then there were eight. 8 little kids are playing with kevin, one got tripped and then there were seven. 7 little kids were throwing bricks, one got hit and then there were six. 6 little kids are eating chives, one got sick and then there were five. 5 little kids are now at war, one went down and now there are four. 4 little kids saw reality, one enjoyed and now there are three. 3 little kids went to Timbuktu, one got lost and now there are two. 2 little kids have spun and spun, one fell down and now there is one. 1 little kid is all but done, he runs home and now there are none. -ShadowFlame431

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Date: 5/23/2016 7:02:00 AM
Excellent opener Victoria, and welcome to the Soup :-)
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Victoria Ward
Date: 5/23/2016 7:28:00 AM
thanks so much
Date: 5/14/2016 6:13:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Victoria. :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 6:18:00 PM
Victoria,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/13/2016 5:12:00 PM
Wow, this is quite disturbing, I know it is not seriously morbid, quite humorous in a way. Cleverly done.
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:28:00 PM
Victoria, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2016 12:22:00 PM
This is really a parody Poem but it wasent an option...sorry
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