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Birds flutter in autumn breeze Kids playing in the sun The dog scratch its fleas As the orange sky shun Bonfires blaze at the beachside And the party heats up Surfers catch a high tide Couples in the corner makeup Settling in for the night Dreaming of autumn’s bright light December 28, 2017.

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Date: 12/28/2017 8:16:00 PM
Yes my friend your writing has reached another level. Good One!
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Date: 12/28/2017 1:43:00 PM
Easy flow...I like it...all the best niketa
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Niketa Mckenzie
Date: 12/28/2017 1:57:00 PM
aww thanks arturo

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