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Why do we have to be so blind when we're reborn every time why not use the knowledge gained when we were called by different names? Why must we always start from scratch to err and suffer and illness catch why does it take us fifty years of pain and suffering and endless tears? Oh, to do it all again knowing what I didn't then. Would words unspoken in sadness mired have kept the gun from being fired?

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Date: 8/16/2009 7:23:00 AM
This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke
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Date: 8/16/2009 5:16:00 AM
Congrats on this selection. I'm 80 years old and I know exactly what you mean. Love, daver
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Date: 8/16/2009 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations! Nicely written Rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:04:00 PM
Profoundly written my friend Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Danielle>>James
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Date: 8/11/2009 3:35:00 AM
a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:41:00 PM
Such a heart-breaking poem, Danielle. If only we could turn back the clock in some cases...and maybe things would have turned out differently....always such a huge speculation that we have all dealt with. Congrats on this introspective poem being among the featured works this week. Well deserved recognition!! ~
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Danielle. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:43:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Danielle.rgds Brian
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Date: 8/9/2009 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured, Danielle. Keep writing! DAS-J
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:19:00 AM
congrats on being feature.
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Date: 8/9/2009 9:39:00 AM
Danielle - interesting question that I reckon we all ponder - I certainly wish i would have knew then what I know now - Thats for sure - God Bless, MJ
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