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Zero comments again I stay up late just to see If someone read verse Tunes sink through my head Zero for eternity Can't help but feel dread Zero, that number Is shameful - who's fault is that? Not yours, mine of course Zero in on me Felt zero satisfaction Make me joyous please Hey! Brighten my night Fireworks burst when I close eyes I'm 18, no zero!!! Almost on cloud se- Venture into my mind's eye Don't understand it... I have zero views My world is moving on fast And I'm lone boy

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Date: 6/25/2018 3:07:00 AM
Excellent. Interesting subject. Done well. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/25/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thank you! I enjoy, reading your comments on my poetry. You're welcome ^-^ -JWE
Date: 10/5/2015 3:43:00 PM
Great write J... the sum of zero... interesting choice of theme, but you had a lot to say on the topic. Will definitely be "Zero-ing" in on your work ;) ~~X~~
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