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08/06/08

As the rain hits my face I think of a place Outside the box Inner-thoughts Creep out my pen Is where my imagination begins Smooth strokes Late-nyte tokes Of the LG Relax Me... Miguel Angel Jimenez Father-less for 2 months And some days Got me dazed A bit confused.. More-A-Less abused By this cold world... Lost like being in a cinnamon swirl Breakfast, makes me want to... Break fast from this life... Life, what the fucc is lyfe for people lyke us? Is & always be an unanswered question... Not to mention, The different directions Of my inner-beast... Searching for something to... Feast upon... Up all nyte watchin'... Cheech & Chong... Wondering if I'm wrong?

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/30/2009 12:28:00 AM

Nice work Miguel, I really dig your flow...Raul

Prentice Elsey

Date: 3/29/2009 3:47:00 AM

I loved your style of mixed words, I to would one day wite of how I feel seen into words, I loved this poem.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2009 6:16:00 PM

So sad, Migues. I have been fatherless for just over two months now. I pray it will get easier for both of us with time. I feel lost sometimes, too. Writing is a great way to connect with others and move outside of our own problems. Best wishes, Carolyn