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03-01-2011

sea shells singing songs while waves wash weary worn weeds echoing eons posted 3/1/11

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Date: 3/2/2011 10:12:00 AM
step away from the alliteration....;) ease off a wee bit, best of luck, you have made marvelous progress as a poet! Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2011 9:22:00 AM
Good alliterations Jimmy. Good luck in Chris's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/2/2011 9:02:00 AM
Also, this is a magnificant alliteration Haiku, Jimmy. Number one in my books. Lainie To my fav's!
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Date: 3/2/2011 8:59:00 AM
You a a master of Haiku's dear Jimmy. Such powerful images and emotions conveyed. Lainie
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Date: 3/1/2011 2:23:00 PM
You've painted a beautiful picture here, JAM. If this is for Chris's Contest, good luck! Looks real good! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:42:00 AM
Hey we both did one about sea shells..great minds etc.etc...lol good luck Jimmy..Love,Deb
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:02:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku with Alliteration--kashinath
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Date: 3/1/2011 10:16:00 AM
beautiful alliteration with good expression on sea shells. Jimmy
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