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27.11.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Electrifying chords, searching tones of love with overflowing devotion Fate was present created vibrations Double footprints in the snow Winter explosion in the crystal vase powdered, ivory roses He stole my breath when our lips collided without hesitation Looking at him – through frozen eye lashes Out of control from a thousand shivers just a few seconds Is it possible to open up all the locks where uncounted of white snowflakes are stored Ready to sing a sonata without a particular reason

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2023 8:55:00 AM

Double footprints in the snow Winter explosion in the crystal vase…very nice, dear poet!

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/28/2023 4:16:00 PM

as a poet who writes romantic poetry, this one touched my heart dear poet

Eve Roper

Date: 11/28/2023 8:32:00 AM

the imagery of snow through foot prints in the snow , a kiss and frozen eyelashes, stunning sonata ready to sing... Lovely write.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/28/2023 7:05:00 AM

Wow this is absolutely gorgeous, how soul warming can a winter sonata sound youve shown that through your descriptive imagery and depth of emotions woven here in such creative manner. Eloquent write this is and i love ivory roses and the opening lines here too stood out for me. Picture goes so well with your word weaving, goodluck in the contest dear anne lise

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/28/2023 5:54:00 AM

The warmth of love can shield you from the harshness of winter. A wonderfully romantic poem my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:48:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jerry :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/28/2023 5:34:00 AM

A beautiful, romantic sonata, Dear Anne-Lise! I always enjoy the he uniqueness of your poems. hugs ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment :) - I really appreciate your kind comment, Mala :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2023 5:11:00 AM

Beautiful, romantic. Much enjoyed the vibes of your poem, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:13:00 PM

- Vijay, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/27/2023 8:18:00 PM

Beautifully lovely! Have wonderful winter days & nights ~ AA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:12:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Abdullah :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/27/2023 5:15:00 PM

oh so romantic, Anne-Lise! I love the comparison of the warmth of love to the chilly winter...that was brilliant. Nicely done...have a pleasant evening and hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:11:00 PM

- Dear Sara, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - ... I appreciate it very much :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/27/2023 4:57:00 PM

A beauty, Anne. Lucky fellow:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:10:00 PM

- Many thanks Daniel, for your lovely comment ... appreciate it very much :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/27/2023 4:54:00 PM

A very romantic if not chilly romantic verse Anne-Lise, huddling together will keep them warm. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 3:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - I really appreciate your kind comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/27/2023 1:36:00 PM

Simply splendid. The warmth of your heartfelt words, melt ones heart as the chill of winter is depicted so clearly in this frosty sonata. A beautiful piece Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 4:15:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.V :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 11/27/2023 1:27:00 PM

Nothing like a warm sweet kiss on an icy cold day?

Tom Woody
Date: 11/27/2023 4:57:00 PM

Indubitably

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 4:10:00 PM

- A kiss can make the earth spin, they say... it warms a heart and cold winter lips, Tom :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/27/2023 1:17:00 PM

Anne-Lise, your poetic creation exudes a tender and exquisite essence, adorned with a captivating choice of vocabulary. The profound beauty of your final stanza further enhances the overall artistry of your poem. Best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 4:13:00 PM

- Winter is cold ... hearts need warmth, Las :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 11/27/2023 1:05:00 PM

Love that last stanza...this is a tender and beautiful poem.. lovely selection of words..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 4:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 11/27/2023 12:38:00 PM

Sunshine what beautiful love poem! Just lovely….Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 4:04:00 PM

- Many thanks Deb, glad you enjoyed it :) - hugs