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20.09-2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Pleiades 6 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

3rd place in the contest

Vivid illustrations Velvet draped black long cape Vibration from bat wings Veins cracked by his sharp teeth Violets blue - not red Virgin anemia Vegetable soup, no thanks

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/29/2023 11:17:00 AM

Spine chilling, Anne-Lise. The evil of the vampire is unleashed at full force in your poem. So many wonderful, descriptive lines like "virgin anemia!" Congratulations on your win! So well written. Blessings and hugs! Think I will go look for that wooden stake I've been keeping!

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 8:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anne, Very nicely penned

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 12:22:00 PM

- Thank you very much for my win in your contest, Joseph :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2023 1:11:00 PM

Hi Sunshine Smile, don't think I have forgotten you, your loyal friendship and that you are my poetry sis. Our business as usual, often claims my attention. Your poem sends chills down my spin so real and such a clever ending. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:19:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2023 11:20:00 AM

Oooh spooky one.. you really created imagery in this one about vampires.. Great selection of words and use of the letter V... An excellent entry to his contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:19:00 AM

- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/22/2023 8:01:00 AM

WoW! Ann-Lise, This is a good take on the contest theme. You did well finding v words that made sense. I found it quite challenging. Well done. Best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend-Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:19:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/22/2023 6:16:00 AM

I love the ending of this wonderful descriptive pleiades. LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:18:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Nancy :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/21/2023 11:18:00 PM

so enjoyable smiling at the end, i love soups, i must not be a vampire indeed, beautiful and precise portrait , enjoyed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:18:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 9/21/2023 8:51:00 PM

The image and the poem are equally creepy and horrifying ! The comic relief at the end is heartening. A great entry. All the Best Anne.Love and hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:18:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/21/2023 8:16:00 AM

Creedy and ghoulish til I got to the last line and burst our laughing ! Adored the picture you found,, Now that's almost as creepy as your poem! Pretty sure on a winner with this one my friend.. Cheers Sv

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:18:00 AM

- Thank you very much, S.V. :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2023 3:24:00 AM

Creative lines penned in this one. Reads like a good contender to me for a contest if it is for one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 2:17:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs