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~ the traceless figures - leave the deepest traces ~ quote by poet A spark was lit of foreign energies the flame of wickedness - a vampire epidemic The evil demons somewhat pale, admittedly Bloody Mary - cheers Cold and cruel they satisfy their thirst A beast of the night and darkness which are vulnerable to sunlight I swear the flame's fidelity is torn of these night stalking creatures they party all night bloody foul-smelling corpse shirt - red carpet dress code 19.04.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - 'V' Words Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Constance La France

Date: 4/24/2023 5:15:00 AM

Sunshine, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, you write a good vampire poem, I like your quote and image too, congratulations. !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 6:51:00 AM

- Many thanks, Constance ... a great challenge ... I like to participate :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/23/2023 6:14:00 PM

A vampire epidemic is a scary thought Ann-Lise. An impressive write, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs Belle :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:37:00 AM

- Belle, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/23/2023 10:12:00 AM

A fantastic vampire poem, with stunning images. 'The evil demons somewhat pale, admittedly Bloody Mary-cheers,' is a fine example. Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:36:00 AM

- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/23/2023 8:28:00 AM

I missed this one when you posted it. Wow best description I have read of the gruesome figures. Congrats on a wonderfully well earned Win Ann-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:36:00 AM

- Wendy, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2023 7:56:00 AM

oh what a cool last line that is with the dress code thing. very creative, and Congrats in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:35:00 AM

- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/23/2023 4:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Sunshine. I like your poem... Well written.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:34:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Aldonso :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/23/2023 4:01:00 AM

Congrats sweet friend. God bless you. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:34:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Gina :) - hugs

Clifford Villalon

Date: 4/23/2023 1:28:00 AM

Is the party held in Castle Combe?... Congratulations Miss Sunshine! =)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:34:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Cliff :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/23/2023 12:36:00 AM

"flame of wickedness" - Connecting the vampire with epidemic... Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Alex :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/22/2023 10:50:00 PM

Vampires dance.....! Congratulations Smile on your first place win. Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 4/22/2023 2:42:00 PM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:32:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/22/2023 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a story/write/quote/picture. Have a blessed weekend.......

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:32:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/22/2023 11:38:00 AM

An eerie write Anne-Lise. I love it! Congratulations on your win! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:31:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/22/2023 10:31:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congrats on your fine win. Have a nice day;-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:31:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/22/2023 7:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Dear Sunshine! This is really spooky and dark!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:31:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Mala :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/21/2023 9:57:00 PM

Your vampire poem is right on the mark. It should do well. As for my poem Stealing a rainbow, we all know it's impossible, so love is unattainable.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2023 4:08:00 AM

- Yes, we all know it's impossible to steal the rainbow my friend :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/21/2023 9:41:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, You’ve penned a good entry on Vampires for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Well done. Have a good evening and weekend-Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:30:00 AM

- Alexis, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 4/21/2023 7:27:00 PM

Well written, Sunshine. good luck my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:30:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Eve :) - hugs

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 4/21/2023 3:19:00 PM

Very spooky and macabre. Good luck with the contest, Sunshine. I think you have a winner. Take care, Shirley

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Shirley :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/21/2023 4:07:00 AM

Love the quote and the poem. Spooky creatures fleeing with sunlight, but performing macabre dances at night. All the Best dear Smile. Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2023 12:10:00 PM

- Valsa, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2023 8:01:00 AM

This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2023 12:48:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2023 6:04:00 AM

Those evil ones--well depicted, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2023 12:47:00 PM

- Yes, those evil ones Vijay :) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/19/2023 11:27:00 PM

Dark, but well written, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2023 2:26:00 AM

- Vampire theme is dark as in the grave, Jo - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2023 4:56:00 PM

They find love at first bite, Very nicely penned Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2023 2:25:00 AM

... :))) ... yes, at first bite ... but, the love is not long-lasting, Joseph :))) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/19/2023 3:59:00 PM

Must be nice being in Norway to cold for vampires there : ). Great poem , hugs : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2023 2:22:00 AM

- It is often cold in Norway ... but not all year round ... many thanks for your comment, Stephan :) - hugs