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15.12.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Nursery rhymes or stories
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

1st place in the contest

A snowy day, hurray ! The sky is blue the dream came true. Even though I'm only five I manages to do a snowman alive. A snowy day, as sugar sprinkles, hooray! Roll and roll the snowball grow, gets bigger and heavy, it goes real slow. A large, a medium and an even smaller ball not a problem at all. A snowy day, my friendly neighbor helped me, hooray! Everyone knows ... he must have a carrot nose. A snowy day, hurray !

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2024 11:45:00 AM

I wonder what secret the little boy is sharing with the snowman. I enjoyed reading your work from the perspective of a little one. No snow here but winter isn't over. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 6:24:00 AM

This was so lovely..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Len Gasun

Date: 12/26/2023 12:47:00 AM

This is an adorable rhyme poem my dear poet friend Anne-lise. Big congrats on your first place win! Merry Christmas to you and your family! Wishing you all the BEST that the season has to offer. This occasion and this coming year, may you be gifted with countless blessings!

Valsa George

Date: 12/25/2023 8:14:00 PM

A cute picture and a lovely rhyme. The five year old looks so sweet. Congratulations Anne on your first place win. Have a Happy Christmas... ! Love and hugs...

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2023 10:15:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2023 11:33:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/cute snowman write again. Hugs... Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................

Joseph May

Date: 12/21/2023 4:19:00 AM

A lovely celebration of building a snowman on a snowy day, Merry Christmas to you and your Anne, hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 12/19/2023 9:45:00 PM

A fun nursery rhyme for children, Anne-Lise, you tell a great tale. Good entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! Hugs, Bill

Paul Bell

Date: 12/19/2023 9:30:00 AM

We got a day of snow and I did manage to build the guy. Melted two days later, gutted.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/17/2023 12:26:00 PM

A fun/cute snowman write/picture. Kids will love it. We both did this one. Hugs... A Very Merry Christmas/Happy New Years to you. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/17/2023 8:06:00 AM

Reminds me of times when I was a kid! It was fun indeed. Loved sugar sprinkles as a description. Very sweet!!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/16/2023 3:45:00 PM

You make me want to be a child again dear Anne, so beautiful word and art too Merry Christmas Blessings to you and yours xo

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/16/2023 7:29:00 AM

Oh this is such a delightful poem, dear! Absolutely beautifully done for the contest, with such jolly vibes of innocence and jovial aura... It's truly a lovely one for the children and your rhymes also flow so lyrically.. Enjoyed reading this :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/16/2023 5:46:00 AM

Fun and joy exude throughout, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed the celebration you convey in voice of children at play.

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/16/2023 1:52:00 AM

Lighthearted and lovely! Poetry needs more snowballs. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/15/2023 7:07:00 PM

Children would love this beautifully written rhyme about fun in the snow. Nicely written, Anne-Lise. :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/15/2023 5:03:00 PM

A beautiful story for this season, my friend. Best of luck with the contest Anne-Lise

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/15/2023 3:31:00 PM

a beautiful children's story, Anne-Lise. This is calming and joyful, a masterful creation. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2023 2:15:00 PM

A lovely story for children Anne-Lise, you write these so well. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/15/2023 1:54:00 PM

Anne-Lise, Your piece is so captivating. Your verses' brilliance evokes endless joy, like a calming nursery rhyme that would attract younger children. Your writing, as shown by its perfect word choice, will fascinate young brains. Good luck with the contest

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2023 1:42:00 PM

A lovely nursery rhyme my friend.. it flows really well amd young kids will love it..