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22.11.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Stars Of Clarity
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

1st place in the contest

In the realms of heaven, while the moons gears turn As adventure gold, stars of clarity with merry mysteries Whisper gentle words of golden value, changeless bliss With shimmer of silver, soft is the touch Uninhibited by time, in the sweetness of moments The honest eyes, speechless with admiration Waiting for Cinderella, that takes the milky way home Through golden banners, up toward the sky Crystal spear flickering spire, a shooting star Unreal as dreams, beauty has kissed They still greet us generously, with antique virtues Through the celestial looms of time flawless pearls in the threads of light This priceless gift, which all mankind may share

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2023 4:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely "Stars of Clarity" write/picture. Hugs... Have a wonderful day with your win...............

Silent One

Date: 12/4/2023 2:27:00 PM

I knew this would be a top winner..lovely poem. Congratulations

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/4/2023 9:04:00 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win, Anne-Lise.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/4/2023 12:12:00 AM

Oh wow what a gorgeous picture to go with your ethereal and beautiful poem, i really loved the flow of this and the imagery you’ve painted so seamlessly in such a creative manner. I must also point out that the cinderella line won me over, and i was in awe? Captivated by the way you’ve written this, fits the theme of the prompt so eloquently,i also love the milky way line and ending, very unique. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2023 5:13:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us about "Stars Of Clarity". I enjoyed reading your version. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K

Paige Hind

Date: 11/24/2023 6:30:00 PM

Beautiful! I enjoyed reading!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/24/2023 3:09:00 PM

This is wonderful, Anne-Lise. BOL in the contest! hugs :)

Maria Williams

Date: 11/24/2023 5:53:00 AM

Beautiful poetry Anne filled with shimmering imagery. I love the image you've used as well. Good luck in the contest . .Hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/23/2023 3:53:00 PM

Lovely poetry Anne-Lise, beautiful words, they’re ‘flawless pearls in the threads of light.’ All the best, Belle

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/23/2023 3:11:00 PM

Your poem is both flawless and a gift from the heart, thank you for sharing yourself and through every precious word penned Anne. xo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/23/2023 5:44:00 AM

Much enjoyed a ride through your hues of cosmos above. Well done, Anne-Lise.

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/22/2023 4:39:00 PM

such beauty in images and feelings, i adore this luminous poeù, thanks Poet

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/22/2023 4:24:00 PM

Very beautiful poem!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/22/2023 3:38:00 PM

a beautiful and stunning write, Anne-Lisa. It was a sheer delight to read and an awesome entry for the contest. I loved these lines: tars of clarity with merry mysteries Whisper gentle words of golden value, changeless bliss. A superb job with outstanding imagery! best wishes with the contest, Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 11/22/2023 1:45:00 PM

Goodness. You one-upped on this one. Maybe two-upped. This is truly stunning poetry, and I don't gush often. "He takes the Milky Way home..." Love that

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/22/2023 1:38:00 PM

"Waiting for Cinderella, that takes the milky way home Through golden banners," -- "Through the celestial looms of time flawless pearls in the threads of light" -- flawless poetry. Superb!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/22/2023 1:28:00 PM

Such a wonderful poem with stunning metaphors coupled with top notch diction is just exquisite. Your magical thoughts shed even more beauty to this writing. Happy thanksgiving to you and yours

Silent One

Date: 11/22/2023 10:45:00 AM

This priceless gift which all mankind may share.. so very true and a lovely poem full of magical imagery... this one should do well in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2023 10:56:00 AM

- Many thanks, my friend :) - hugs