- Spring's Gold -

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18.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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@@@ Whistling winter keeps us silent.Cold moments turn into bright yellow buttons along the path. The coltsfoot has flourished. A few insects are beginning to stir. Honeycombs stick sweetly in the mouth. Changing surfaces, when spring breaks.Makes your stomach tingle with hypersensitive details in this sonnet's time.Everyday emotions rainbow painted an verdure sheen, overwhelming excitement @@ // @ // (¯`v´¯) @ // @ (¯`(O)´¯) (¯`v´¯) @ // (¯`v´¯) ( _. ._ ) (¯`(O)´¯) (¯`v´¯) // (¯`(O)´¯) @ ( _. ._ ) (¯`(O)´¯) // ( _. ._ ) @ ( _. ._ ) @ @

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Peter Dome

Date: 3/21/2024 1:46:00 PM

Wow so beautiful, eloquent and clever. Your. The use of language is sublime. What unrivalled talent that has such an inspirational and charm. A favourite. Well done. Made my day. Pete.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/21/2024 5:58:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I am always amazed at how you celebrate nature, spring, and flowers. The juxtaposition of characters is lovely. I think it's all awesome.