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~ oblivion - an assault against the memories ~ quote by poet the tears dried before the sun rose return the grief on paper wings let everything fly lost in the blue sky ~ no time to hesitate though in terrible wonder ~ oblivion as distracts a place completely without a facade passion never touches her string ~ an evanescent illusion "if you need me, call and I'll come" in the paleness of the moonlight she waits 24.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - 'O' Words Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Emilia James

Date: 4/5/2023 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sunshine. Emilia : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2023 2:39:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Emilia :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/27/2023 3:57:00 AM

a place completely without a facade passion never touches her string…sobering, dear Sunshine.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:19:00 AM

- Kim, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/26/2023 8:10:00 PM

'Oblivion is a place completely without a facade and it waits in the paleness of moonlight'..... ! Such apt description. Congratulations dear Smile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:18:00 AM

- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/26/2023 5:25:00 PM

Great poem and I love the ending. Congratulations :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:18:00 AM

- Many thanks for reading and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2023 3:14:00 PM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:17:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2023 2:58:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:17:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/26/2023 1:11:00 PM

Sweet sweetness Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win!:) hugs and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:16:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations on my - "O" poem, Linda :) - hugs

Constance La France

Date: 3/26/2023 12:38:00 PM

Sunshine, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your creative poem. I love the image and your quote also, blessings, Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:15:00 AM

- Many thanks for my win in your contest, Constance :) - hugs

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/25/2023 11:56:00 PM

Too tough to go through this difficult word. But really well done. Sure to win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Anisha :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/25/2023 7:14:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, You did a good job with your chosen word. It's a hard word to write about but I think you did a good job describing it. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:14:00 AM

- Hi Alexis, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/25/2023 2:21:00 PM

It would be wonderful if somebody from oblivion would wait and then come right back, Anne-Lise. A poem that is really well written. Best of luck,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/25/2023 12:10:00 PM

A sense of abandonment and desperation runs through your terrific imagery Anne-Lise! Quite a write!! Happy Saturday xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:13:00 AM

- Many thanks Mike, for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 3/25/2023 8:33:00 AM

love this imaginative write

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:12:00 AM

- Jack, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/24/2023 11:11:00 PM

It's delightful if someone in oblivion waits and comes back. Nicely penned poem. Good luck, SS.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Subimal :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/24/2023 7:31:00 PM

Nice job, Anne. Very hard word to describe. Good luck. Have a great weekend:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:12:00 AM

- Many thanks Daniel, for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/24/2023 6:53:00 PM

Wow I felt oblivious devotion, and unhappiness subsided by the hope offered by a new day. Don't tell me I am wrong, cause your poem sent me to oblivion and back and I like it that way. Excellent writing Ann-Lise. You are a master of saying a lot in a few words. That is a talent. Best wishes Wen.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:11:00 AM

- Wendy, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs