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- My Brother Stole My Halloween Candy -

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Listen this is no comedy - you stole all my candy I know how much younger my brother is ... love and tolerance Sometimes it requires confrontation, get out frustration and anger Forgiveness or not Does he deserve to be forgiven? Right now I feel : angry, very disappointed, low blood sugar, and are tired Just wait ... until Saturday Payback time 16/10/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved If I were your brother Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Bobby May 1st place in the contest Poem of the Week: 20/10/2019

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/2/2019 9:11:00 AM

Double congrats on your winning poem Anne - Lise. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2019 1:14:00 PM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 11/1/2019 4:57:00 PM

Nice poem, nice win Sunshine!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2019 1:14:00 PM

- Many thanks, Timothy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 10/31/2019 5:27:00 PM

Yep that sure deserves a 1st in the competition. Excellent - CONGRATS on 1st place and POTW Anne-Lise. Best wishes...Ron x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/1/2019 5:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Ron :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/31/2019 9:01:00 AM

I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 9:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 10/31/2019 7:13:00 AM

Wonderful Anna-Lise. Congrats on both POTW and 1st place.. Love this! hugs // Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 7:26:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2019 5:57:00 PM

POTW and a top spot, many congrats on your success Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:25:00 AM

- A double "Bingo" :))) - Many thanks for congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2019 2:39:00 PM

Hey, hey, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your big winner in Bobby's contest. Way to go! Cheers, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:26:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Gershon - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There

Date: 10/30/2019 2:14:00 PM

Back with a congrats on your win ~ Now, don't let that soften you up to much, my friend...He must still pay ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:28:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/30/2019 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win. So Cute. What a great picture to go with your poem. I still need to learn how to do the pictures. Enjoy your win..............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 10/30/2019 10:09:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congrats on a super write. You could use Jan's remedy and give him exlax!!t8t lol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:28:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Curtis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/30/2019 9:26:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I really enjoyed this. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:27:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/30/2019 9:11:00 AM

back for the third time...isn't it the third time's a charm?....anyway congratulations on your first place win my friend :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:30:00 AM

- Always a pleasure to see you on my poems, Sandra :) - Many thanks for congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win my sweet friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2019 8:51:00 AM

- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/29/2019 11:12:00 AM

Haha, low blood sugar and high blood pressure! Congrats on your POTW Anne-Lise. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2019 12:03:00 PM

- Many thanks Cecilia, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/27/2019 8:29:00 AM

A fun poem Anne-Lise! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2019 12:02:00 PM

- Many thanks, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/25/2019 9:51:00 PM

congratulations on POTW my friend :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2019 1:57:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/25/2019 9:06:00 AM

You need something SALTY to raise the PRESSURE...CONGRATULATIONS Anne-Lise ON POTW...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2019 9:24:00 AM

:))) - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 10/24/2019 11:12:00 AM

Sun, congratulations on POTW with this delightful poem. My younger brother was a pain too. My mom said share so I gave him all the candy I did not like and the apples !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2019 1:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 10/23/2019 2:40:00 PM

Congrats on POTW..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2019 1:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/21/2019 5:18:00 PM

Congrats!! Anne-Lise on POTW!!...now time for some candy!...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2019 1:28:00 PM

- Many thanks W.W., for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/21/2019 1:05:00 PM

This made me giggle Anne-Lise. My older brother used to steal our candy loot. He and mom would take the best pieces. Congratulations on having this fun poem honored with POTW! : )xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2019 1:28:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/21/2019 9:51:00 AM

Back with Congrats Anne-Lise on potw

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2019 1:27:00 PM

- Many thanks for a re- visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/21/2019 4:50:00 AM

A cute poem, congratulations on POTW Anne-Lise! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2019 1:26:00 PM

- Many thanks Tania, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/20/2019 7:23:00 PM

Oh my!!! It's payback time, is it?? Poor little brother. But, then again- he stole your Halloween Candy!! Yep!! Paybacks are rough. This is soooo cute, clever and creative. Made me smile. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2019 2:54:00 AM

- Many thanks Brandy, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2019 4:33:00 PM

what a cute poem Anne-Lise many congrats on POTW and good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2019 2:53:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)