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13.11.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Mother, Magical, Moment -
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

~ small moments contribute to a little "spice" to your dreams ~ the poet's quote Through the November night behind the velvet curtain The whitewashed church spire with mahogany support beams - a faint silhouette in the dark A shooting star the glow beam so bright quickly disappeared into a blur Caught in a fleeting vision - we shared souls for a moment I forgot to wish

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2023 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win. A creative November write/pretty picture/Love your quote. I love this time of the year. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 11/15/2023 3:29:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, I love the glimpse of that shooting star visual you painted with your words so well. Enjoyed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:39:00 PM

- I saw it with my own eyes ... sharing it with you, Nancy :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2023 1:26:00 PM

Nice one Anne-Lise, next time you miss a shooting star wish on the new moon, it works, promise - it is a treat to see a shooting star though, I do agree. Keep the golden pen going dear friend, Love and hugs Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:37:00 PM

- A special view on a starry sky late November night, Jenny :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 11/14/2023 10:15:00 AM

Shooting stars can be wished on, Nice poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:35:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jay :) - hugs :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2023 10:03:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, I don't see shooting stars very often since I live where to many lights.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:35:00 PM

- There are no street lights here ... and only a few houses ... a place where we can see the northern lights from time to time, Eve :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/14/2023 7:23:00 AM

Shoot stars indeed are but a flash, you can always wish for your desires. Hugs and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:31:00 PM

- Experience is big enough for me, Victor ... not often I've seen it :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/14/2023 5:56:00 AM

A shooting star the glow beam so bright quickly disappeared into a blur Caught in a fleeting vision--moment beautifully captured, Anne-Lise. Lovely poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:30:00 PM

- It was a beautiful moment, Vijay :) - hugs

Arlo Parker

Date: 11/13/2023 11:23:00 PM

In the blink of an eye....dream wishes can disappear. May you catch the next one, A-L. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:29:00 PM

- One is never prepared ... maybe next time, Arlo :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/13/2023 3:20:00 PM

Stunning is the quote as the poem it is. Beautiful poem, but shouldn't forget your wish. Good luck in the contest. You wrote a a brilliant one. Hugs my friendxxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:27:00 PM

- Maybe next time ... I can grant a wish, Maria :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 3:19:00 PM

I enjoyed the delicate imagery you created, Anne-Lise. I sometimes forget to 'wish upon a shooting star' so caught up in the moment. This poem flowed eloquently. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:26:00 PM

- A few seconds in awe, Sara :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 1:23:00 PM

Nice imagery and flow to this one, Anne-Lise. Thanks for sharing your poetic talents with us, my friend. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:25:00 PM

- Thank you for reading, Bill :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/13/2023 12:36:00 PM

nicely done, anne-lise! i love the surprise of the last line...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:24:00 PM

- I just enjoy the moment, Ilene :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/13/2023 12:05:00 PM

As it is dear poet, caught in a moment's rapture by nature to forget to wish, good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:23:00 PM

- Thank you for your words, Frederic :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 11/13/2023 12:01:00 PM

I forget to wish alot of times too, too caught in the moment. I really love the way you’ve painted imagery thoughout this dear anne lise, very descriptive and beautiful. And your quote fits the poem perfectly too. Love it. BOL for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2023 12:22:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs