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29.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Keep, Knock, Knotty -
 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

Will always keep my heirlooms Great grandmother's church shawl, for the pew in a prayer A pretty peacock hairpin, my grandmother loved Antique china tea set, with hand painted cherry blossoms A jewelry box with a silk bottom, my mother's pearls they smell of anemones and lavender Inspired by the story, the last woman has died Remembering theirs sense of humor, and gift for puns Nothing but warm anticipation of my heart and my fingertips a cocoon that envelops me Keep the meaning of a simple memory echoing through time

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Date: 11/2/2023 4:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Anne
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Date: 11/1/2023 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Keep" is a lovely write/pretty picture with a great ending. Great memories are the best kind to have. Hugs... Have Blessed Day...........................
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:36:00 PM
Special items, special person, special memories….Just love this sweet touching write Sunshine! Debx
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Date: 10/31/2023 1:08:00 PM
what a touching piece Anne-Lise it resonates with me especially coming up to nearly a year since mum passed away. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/31/2023 9:48:00 AM
There is a tendency to get rid of old heirlooms. Pity. They are our memories. Blessings.
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Date: 10/31/2023 1:43:00 AM
oh this is so charming , keeping the lovely things beautiful pic to soothe our senses
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Debjani :) - hugs
Date: 10/30/2023 11:00:00 AM
"and gift for puns Nothing but warm anticipation of my heart and my fingertips a cocoon that envelops me Keep the meaning of a simple memory echoing through time" -- Lovely writing, Anne; truly heart felt. Blessings.
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:47:00 AM
- Joe, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/30/2023 10:41:00 AM
Delightful and poignant remembering, A-L, :o)
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:46:00 AM
- Many thanks Arlo, for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/30/2023 5:45:00 AM
"Keep the meaning of a simple memory echoing through time", Wonderful write Anne
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs
Date: 10/30/2023 5:17:00 AM
Those are the treasures --gems of memories. A lovely write that everyone can relate to. Cherish your keepsakes, as you do, Anne-Lise---and enjoy the loving recall they inspire.
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:46:00 AM
- Vijay, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/30/2023 1:08:00 AM
Nice match with the photo, Anne-Lise. Good entry for the contest, good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:45:00 AM
- Many thanks Bill, for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/29/2023 11:26:00 PM
So beautiful and well written for the prompt: to keep our loved ones memories close to us through heirlooms; etc is sometimes the only way we feel close to the ones that now reside amongst angels. Flow of this is gorgeous and is so very descriptive and touching! Always a pleasure reading your poems: goodluck for the contest
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs
Date: 10/29/2023 6:22:00 PM
Anne-Lise, your writing is absolutely beautiful and captivating. Your poem deeply resonated with me because I also find great joy in the cocoon-like feeling that you so eloquently describe. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:45:00 AM
- Las, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/29/2023 4:51:00 PM
Your poem resonated with me for I, too, am a keeper of heirlooms and family memories. I love that cocoon feeling that you describe. A good contest contender. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:44:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 10/29/2023 4:05:00 PM
Keepsakes and memories of the loved ones we’ve lost are treasures. Sweet write, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:44:00 AM
- Many thanks Lin, for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/29/2023 3:32:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:44:00 AM
- Jeanette, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/29/2023 3:16:00 PM
Love the poem and the photo.
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Date: 10/31/2023 3:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Karen :) - hugs

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