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29.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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every step erased incoming tide mystery - the gordian knot

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Stephan McBride

Date: 4/2/2024 4:59:00 PM

Beautiful poem to leave one thinking of this powerful message : ) hugs

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/31/2024 6:32:00 PM

Anne-Lise, love this. Indeed we can't stop the flow of nature. Only nature itself will do it, although we might try. And this is only the tip of the iceberg.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/31/2024 2:37:00 PM

Anne-Lise, a great haiku, love the mystery of the footprint being erased by the waves. -Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/31/2024 1:21:00 PM

What a great Haiku write with a great picture. I love the beach but no beach near me. Hugs... Have a blessed day/week...........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2024 3:14:00 PM

I like this one. Amazing what water can do to change the shoreline. I enjoyed reading your Haiku. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. What kinds of birds are in your area. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/30/2024 1:37:00 PM

Love it! Footprint completely erased.

Silent One

Date: 3/30/2024 6:59:00 AM

You are so good at these.. this is brilliant once again..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/30/2024 6:00:00 AM

Another awesome Haiku from you dear friend, but whatever form you write in, and you are quite adventurous with all and any different forms and competitions in which you do so well. Hope you are enjoying your change of seasons and getting ready for your summer. Lots of love to you, often think of you. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/29/2024 4:58:00 PM

your Haiku left me breathless, as a true Haiku should. You've got such skill with this form. I'm impressed! Have a lovely Easter weekend, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2024 1:28:00 PM

There will come a time when all mankind's footsteps will be erased. Happy Easter Anne-Lise, just back from travelling again. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Ink Empress

Date: 3/29/2024 11:22:00 AM

What a gorgeous picture youve used for this haiku. A deep and touching one that is so well crafted and delivered. I love “ incoming tide mystery” that hits strong . Pleasure always reading your work. Hope easter holidays are going well. Sending you light always