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25.03.2024
Anne-Lise Andresen
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frost under countdown gauzy veil on winding stream - prominent status

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/31/2024 6:29:00 PM

Anne-Lise, this reminds me of some of the scenery in Alaska, but the stream you show looks more clear than what I have seen in North America. The picture is truly beautiful.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/27/2024 3:36:00 AM

Beautiful nature haiku. Loved it. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2024 11:03:00 PM

That middle line is so lovely!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/26/2024 9:11:00 PM

Cool poem of changing weather, i can see the veil over the stream.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 3/26/2024 7:41:00 PM

Spring in Norway, you are blessed. You have unveiled a vernal paradise, Anne-Lise. Robert

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2024 4:02:00 PM

frost is yielding to spring, Nicely penned Anne, hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2024 3:58:00 PM

what a delightful haiku Anne-Lise I especially love the imagery in the middle line:-) you excel at this form! hugs Jan xx

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/26/2024 12:46:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem Anne-Lise

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2024 6:12:00 AM

Wonderful imagery as always my friend..

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/25/2024 2:36:00 PM

a stunning Haiku, Anne-Lise. I loved the phrase 'frost under countdown'--so creative and original as was 'gauzy veil." Nicely done! Have a great evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 3/25/2024 2:06:00 PM

How beautiful, is the picture and also your haiku, so creative and artistically delivered dear anne lise; i bet norway is a beautiful place too and your environment would inspire you to be so creative with your poems. Loved this. Pleasure always reading your work; sending you light always

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2024 2:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs