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Dolce farniente ...

Blue vision Dipping toes feel the softness The warm breeze of the summer joys tempts me Crystallized sand like feathers on the toes Gold in my eyes Breathe taking and pure bliss 05/09/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper # 2 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 10/12/2020 2:07:00 AM
Such a visual poem. Delightful. Thank you.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2020 2:20:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Sarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/8/2020 10:22:00 AM
Great imagery and a wonderful picture! Loved the title you chose too.... ~ Ani
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Date: 10/8/2020 11:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2020 2:08:00 PM
Oh, sounds heavenly!
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:24:00 AM
- Thank you very much, BJ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 9:13:00 PM
I have tender feet, lol. I always have. I feel what you're saying though. Love the pic and this write. It is very descriptive. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Love, Angela
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Date: 9/25/2020 2:01:00 AM
- Tender feet need soft and warm sand, Angela :) - Many thanks for your comments ... welcome back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 3:47:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, this poem has the feel of summer. i like ir. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2020 10:40:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes this poem felt like summer. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Date: 9/25/2020 1:58:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 10:39:00 AM
Love barefeet in the sand. I also love your verse, Anne-Lise. I want to run out and go right there. Nice imagery!
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Date: 9/24/2020 10:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your friendly support, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/22/2020 6:51:00 AM
Love walking on the beach, especially in the evening. Lovely write Anne-Lise.
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Date: 9/22/2020 7:10:00 AM
- I always walk barefoot ... - Thank you very much, James :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/22/2020 5:58:00 AM
Lovely poem, Anne-Lise. I really liked "warm breeze of the summer joys"... I could feel the warmth on my skin. And not just summer "days", but SUMMER JOYS! Well done. Congrats.
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Date: 9/22/2020 6:44:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your friendly support and congratulations, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/21/2020 10:16:00 AM
Beauty of the view of the feet in the soft sand warming the poet's feet ... Good sensations that awaken sandy poetry, a wonder... salute dear Anne-Lise alkas
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Date: 9/21/2020 10:26:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and the lovely comments, Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/20/2020 2:15:00 PM
Yes indeed... You can literally get closer to nature if you take the time to walk in your bare feet... I really enjoyed this poem and the wonder it creates... Keep up the great writing, my friend :)
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Date: 9/21/2020 9:52:00 AM
- I walk barefoot all year, Kelly ... hate socks :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2020 7:41:00 PM
Here, I am back to congratulate, Anne-Lise, on your win!!
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Date: 9/21/2020 9:50:00 AM
- Always nice to see you, Newton ... many thanks for the congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2020 7:10:00 PM
Lovely write, Sunshine .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..
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Date: 9/21/2020 9:49:00 AM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winner list, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2020 3:05:00 PM
Too true Anne-Lise Sad how this could be turned in its head and used and referenced in the same sentence as Barefoot and Pregnant
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2020 9:48:00 AM
"Barefoot and Pregnant" (???) ... I'm not pregnant :)
Date: 9/10/2020 11:50:00 AM
Anne-Lise I love this poem! beautifully done my friend!!
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Date: 9/10/2020 12:02:00 PM
- A pleasure to hear ... thank you very much, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2020 12:31:00 AM
Simply outstanding, Anne-lise, mine on the same pic pales in comparison:)
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Date: 9/10/2020 6:52:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo ... and yours was beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2020 5:46:00 AM
SO lovely, Anne-Lise. Janice
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Date: 9/10/2020 6:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2020 5:44:00 PM
this is FANTASTIC, dear!! I chose that picture too. Just love that warm sand.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2020 6:50:00 AM
- Andrea, thank you very much for your visit and the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2020 2:09:00 PM
Anne-Lise, this is beautiful, I love the line "Crystallized sand like feathers on the toes" a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 9/10/2020 6:49:00 AM
- Glad you liked my poem - Many thanks for your lovely comments and your priceless fave, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2020 10:41:00 AM
Pure bliss and certainly a pure win - so wonderfully describe I can feel the sand on my toes, and yes barefoot is great! Hugs and blessings dear friend. Jenny.
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Date: 9/10/2020 6:47:00 AM
- I hate socks ... I walk barefoot all year ... but, not when we have snow :) - Thank you very much for your lovely comments, dear sister :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2020 11:14:00 AM
The image is wonderfully represented in this piece!! A sure Top Win!!
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Date: 9/10/2020 6:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for the uplifting comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2020 6:36:00 AM
A vision and feeling of bliss, Anne-Lise! Nowadays, cos of covid, I avoid sandy beaches which tend to get crowded...but yours is one which tempts :) Hugs // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2020 4:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2020 5:32:00 AM
Just the thought of it...ahh!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2020 4:47:00 AM
- Kim, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2020 1:46:00 PM
Great theme for this contest... You did this very well .
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2020 4:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2020 1:29:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I feel this sand and smell the salt in the air!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2020 2:12:00 AM
- Warm sand ... feels lovely in the summer, Caren :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2020 2:34:00 PM
Lovely piece Anne-Lise, makes one think of days on beach we missed this summer. Have a blessed weekend,Gordon
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Date: 9/6/2020 2:10:00 AM
- Gordon, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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