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03.04.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Another song to sing these tears I can't hide Concerns found, an encounter with grief and despair Unknown decisions as a nebulous quest Certainty becomes uncertainty in an reciprocal vulnerability Things slowly die Pay attention ... we develops either physically or mentally Facing the wrong side of the wall I must live on as I pursue my dreams Even traces of breadcrumbs may challenge

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/6/2024 5:44:00 AM

Whatever challenge you might be facing my dear sweet friend i know the others will succumb to your wisdom and strength of character. You are an incredible person, and hope you never have to fight tears back again ever. Love and blessings Jennifer

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/7/2024 2:27:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment Jenny, much appreciated :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2024 2:26:00 AM

You have a strong character and will fight to the end. Hugs xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:49:00 AM

- I'm strong, Victor ... but sometimes I'm tired of being strong - Everything's fine with me ... it's just thoughts that turned into a poem :) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 4/4/2024 2:40:00 PM

Ann this is something to be admired, I mean the way you express. This is another of yours that touches deeply my heart, especially on this moment of my life. Ann you really are an unique poet, you know how to knock everyone's soul. Well done my dear. I must clap my hands. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:46:00 AM

- After reading your last poem I understand ... many thanks for your lovely comment, dear Maria :) - hugs

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/4/2024 11:17:00 AM

Wow dear beautiful Anne- Lise, this touches the heart with its powerful, heart rendering words. Alongside the words, the picture is profound as well. I truly felt this as will all that read it. Every line has great impact with so much deeply expressed thoughts and emotions. The last few lines are so poignant dear, sweet one. Live on - so many more dreams to chase. This really has touched me. Sending you many blessings and big hugs with love xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:44:00 AM

-Christina, it's about acknowledging feelings and sad thoughts...hanging on and enjoying the little things in life...move on :) - Many thanks for your comment, much appreciated :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 4/4/2024 11:17:00 AM

What a poignant and soul hitting writ this is dear anne lise i felt so many lines in this and i love the artwork that youv used here too, which fits your poem so very well. I love especially the lines “ an encounter with grief and despair Unknown decisions as a nebulous quest“ deeply moving! A pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:37:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2024 9:19:00 AM

What a powerful write/picture. Life is not always easy. Hope you are OK... This is a FAV for me. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:35:00 AM

- Life is like a carousel, and you just have to hang on Paula :) - Thank you for your comment and your "fave" is worth its weight in gold :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/4/2024 12:18:00 AM

Quite an emotional write Anne-Lise, we should never give up on hope. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:31:00 AM

- I have faith in hope, Tom ... a thread to hold on to :) - Many thanks for your comment, much appreciated :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/3/2024 11:59:00 PM

wonderful writing. I feel this. God bless you always, love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:30:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Gina :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/3/2024 5:21:00 PM

a gripping poem, Anne-Lise. I've lived some of what you express: Certainty becomes uncertainty in an reciprocal vulnerability Things slowly die. I also felt the hope 'I must live on.." I appreciate the vulnerability expressed in your poem. Hope you are alright...hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:29:00 AM

- We are all vulnerable and life is never a bed of roses ... thoughts appear and it becomes a poem ... but, everything is fine with me Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 4/3/2024 3:08:00 PM

Deep emotions. Hope you are doing welk.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:25:00 AM

- Everything is fine with me, Jay ... thank you very much :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/3/2024 2:25:00 PM

Hope your doing okay, sweet Anne-Lise! That second to last line!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:24:00 AM

- Everything is fine with me ... thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2024 12:15:00 PM

Profound thoughts, Anne-Lise. Very nicely written

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:23:00 AM

- Thank you, Andrea :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/3/2024 11:32:00 AM

I enjoyed this deep, questioning poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:22:00 AM

- Thank you, Hilda :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/3/2024 8:30:00 AM

Life can seem hard like diamonds, without a warmth of glitter -- petrifying~ a disappointed heart aged into stone -- but all such griefs will be broken with time, mended into rainbows. Faith. A beautiful, touching relatable poem. I can relate profoundly.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2024 2:22:00 AM

- So true, Joe :) - Many thanks for your comment, much appreciated :) - hugs